Wonderful story! Very emotional!

Really excellent. The tension of neither of them being comfortable with sharing comes through SO clearly here. Nicely done. I like the interplay of who's the C.O. and who will tell Janet what. Very fun, very them. You really capture their understated interaction and the words packed with so much more information and more emotion than they'll express.

aww hehe I loved that movie when i was little - we're studying it in school now :P

thanks!

-Kc

Cute, very cute. I could see the interaction between the two.

aww that was really cute!

Great story. Loved the pathos throughout wit hMy Fair Lady. Keep up the good work!

This story is wonderful! It is romantic without being overdramatic. I can imagine this kind of scene playing in the TV Series.

That was good.

It's "The rain in spain falls mainly on the plain" - not "down the drain"

Just thought you should know, the quote from 'My Fair Lady' is actually

"the rain in spain falls mainly in the plane"

Cute. :-)

Another winner! I've been delighted to find such a consistently excellent author to add to my favorites.

Thanks, as always.

LOL Fantastic! Please write more!