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| Arialle 2004-07-24 ch 1, | abusene this story is so sad *sniffs* maybe you could write another person's point of view about what just happened? |
| MoMo-ChAn1 (not sign in) 2004-07-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseAi! how sad! Make me cry! So pretty! *claps delightedly, like child when get toy* |
| Isilelen 2004-07-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseAw! that's so cute! ^-^ I love the way you use the analogy of the toymaker in your story! It's really cool and funny too! keep writing! thanks, Isilelen |
| SVZ 2004-07-20 ch 1, | abuseNice, Shima! I love how it has a lot of meaning ^^ Hee, it's a perfect companion for "Broken". Good work! *glomps* |
| tatumli 2004-07-20 ch 1, | abusegood ending to this pair. i thinkthis is really good |
| fefa-chan 2004-07-20 ch 1, | abuseI love the story, the ending was really sweet "Bloody hell, that toymaker has some sweet phrases in his vocabulary" ^^ |