not bad at all but i do have one question...Who is Aslan? Is just that you spelled Athrun wrong?

IT IS GOOD BUT DO A NEW CHAPTER!

Ur, sorry, I guess that was a bit vague. I was kinda assuming that there were other escape pods (or whatever y'call 'em) from the Dominion that survived , other than the one Frey was on. 'Cause I don't think all the Dominion crew members fit on one shuttle.

Is this AU or something? Because the Dominion in the show gets blown up and everyone died o_o;