Short and sweet. I enjoyed it.

Beautiful story.
A beautiful confession, that carries to a beautiful ending.
(Clapping) Well done, soldier. Semper-Fi. Carry on.

its great!

Cute! I really liked it. I didn't find any problems with the spelling, just a few grammar mistakes, which I'm not even really are mistakes since English is a second language for me too. Anyway, well written!

great story!english is your second launguage huh? I could not tell that your had any spelling errors and it's my first launguage! it is very pathetic really.keep up the good work!
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