I LOVE this story. Sure there were minor errors, but the amazingness of the story made them not matter. I especially loved that you still made Draco 'evil'. Sure he was in love with Hermione, but that doesn't mean he should start following Dumbledork. Siriusly, this story is amazing.

Oh, I really enjoyed this story! An original character who is done well, integrated easily, and an original story line. I absolutely loved the ending! Though I must admit I was hoping for a happy ending, I much prefer realistic endings, and you hit the nail on the head. Kudos!

Aww such a sad ending :( But I did love your story, I couldn't stop clicking next :) Can't wait to read the sequel :)

I really liked the start of this chapter, with Draco and Hermione in the bathroom. too bad anything didn't happen ;) anyway I really like your story and it's well written but I am kind of sick of Malfoys moodswings! hah I wanna see some action :b

and I really can't figure out what I think of Abigail, but I guess that's the tricky part about OC's

Can't wait to read the rest!

Rachelle

Your ending broke my heart..

I'm certainly disappointed at how fragile Hermione appears in front of Malfoy, I always thought of Hermione as someone strong and smart enough to hold her ground and confront anyone... and Draco? wasn't this fic supposed to be about him loving her or sth like that? if this seems any kind of romantic to you... well it's kinda twisted, cuz he practically or almost rapes her in front of his house... and that is a romantic fic to you? dude that's just twisted even when he pushed her so hard across the wall that she lost consciousness...this is just wrong...

WOW, is all i can say. I love it. it broke my heart, it truly broke my heart.

can't wait to read the sequel, please update.

beautiful, one of my favorites.

Dear hathor X - this was a really good read. It was exciting and brought tears to my eyes numerous times. Hermione's pain was poignant and heart rendering. All characters, Abigail, Harry, Ginny and (oh love the guy) Draco, were well written and real.

Thank you for the effort and time spent writing this story, I really enjoyed it.

I should hate this story because Draco left, but the truth is I loved it. YOu captured me from the beginning and I think you stayed true to the character personalities and did a reality of what I think Draco would have chosen at that point. I've never, ever thought him evil and really believing in Voldemort, I've always thought of him as feeling entitled and better than everyone else and planning to stay that way, in my mind you hit that. I'm glad you gave him a heart as well and I loved the two love stories in this. I loved your Abigail character and am glad Harry and Abby at least found happiness. Great job. I know it's been a few years, but I just really loved this and had to tell you

Truly, that was such an amazing story. To me, there are really no words to describe the emotion and angst this story had. From the very beginning I was captivated and couldn't stop reading this amazing piece of work. I can only inagine the time and all the effort you must have out into this story. I can honestly say from the first word I read, I could tell this was an immense labor of love!

I want to thank you for sharing your talent and imagnation with us the readers. Thank you for taking the time to complete your story! Also, thank you for anything else I may have forgotten to metion! I am looking forward to reading the sequel! If it is anything like this terrific story, I know I am in for one of the best stories on fanfiction (and I truly mean it)!

ps. Sorry I never took the time to review! There really is no excuse. I know you are not paid and your only compensation is through reviews. I promise to take the time to review more in the sequel. Also sorry for all of my incorrect spelling (it is early in the morning, but I had to finish reading this epic story!

pss. I am really done this time! :D

wait so abigale is hermione's cousin ? that was an interesting chapter i wonder whats going to happen now

oh my

that was definiatly an interesting chapter woaa i wonder who that kid is

oh shnap that was an interesting first chapter oh my i really liked the portrayl of draco i wonder how the conversation will go between the two of them

I liked this story and poor Hermione. Thanks for writing and you are a good author.

Alright, while I like the concept of your story and that D/Hr is not the mushy love story most fics make it out to be I am really disappointed in how you have portrayed Hermione. Your writing is fine in terms of story pace and complex twists. Unfortunately you made Hermione into some pathetic creature instead of the intelligent, proud and brave woman that she is. Sure, she may be naive but there would never be a time when she accepted being cheated on, having sex with a man who violated her, a man who murdered and raped and a man who repeatedly disparaged her and muggles every single moment. She has turned into a submissive half creature and you don't even make it appealing to be with Draco other than he is attractive. I doubt Hermione is so shallow that it would override every moral she has (this is the same person who stood up for S.P.E.W. with no support behind her!). True there are fics where Draco is equally bad but at least in them he can treat Hermione decently every once in a while.

Sorry, I ranted a bit more but I thought it was necessary. Because every time you had Hermione about to stand up for herself she would automatically forgive Draco without hesitation or discussion. I mean, even women who are regularly abused at the very least have ups or apologies. There are no ups with this relationship.

Maybe the story and sequel get better however I guess it just isn't the fic for me. The only reason I stuck by it so long was because it was so promising and I kept hoping you would give Hermione a back bone or at least a personality that didn't resemble an abused, starving pup. I am sorry if this seems cruel actually. This story does have a lot of good points and I hope you keep working hard on your fics, you do have talent. Just maybe next time make Hermione the strong person she deserves to be portrayed as.