  me 12/7/04 . chapter 1 One of the moast awesomeistist storier i have read.Please write more.I do not want to atack you with a berage of sporks. |
| me 12/7/04 . chapter 1 One of the moast awesomeistist storier i have read.Please write more.I do not want to atack you with a berage of sporks. |
| Lord Cirenmas 10/26/02 . chapter 9 Good Story! |
| Sarah 10/25/02 . chapter 9 No words can truly describe how good this story is and give it justice. However the words that have come into my mind the most have been "Wow" or maybe "Tres, tres, tres bien" (Translation: Very, very, very good)
I do have to admit that this last chapter was a little short, but the quality of the stroy in it made up for that.
One last thing to add, please write more. I'm begging you, please don't keep me waiting. Thank you. |
 Spam-The-Great 10/25/02 . chapter 9Nifty! Yes, I finally reviewed it and it's oozing with niftiness! Keep up the good work and keep writing!
P.S. I loved the beginning part where Izzy yelled at the troops! Funness! :D! |
| Lord Cirenmas 10/5/02 . chapter 8 Great Story! |
| Azalai 5/28/02 . chapter 7 Koo story. You know what? I've actually read this before, but stopped reading it at chapter five a long time ago. Isn't that stupid? Neway, this is really koo, so you have to write more please!
-azalai |
| Alex 4/20/02 . chapter 2 I have just read the first two chapters of your story and I must say you are doing pretty good. I really like Magus and Schalla I have wondered about if at the end of the game Magus ever finds schalla and I still wonder who was the lucky man who became schalla,s lover. But above all I think that as of what I have read so far you are doing a very good job. |
| Lord Cirenmas 4/12/02 . chapter 7 Great Story! I can't wait to see more! |
| Vinsecula 4/3/02 . chapter 1 Besides a few trivial misspellings it was great. Very observant to know Janus's cat's name. |
| Lord Cirenmas 4/3/02 . chapter 6 Great Story! I can't wait to see more! |
| Kit Thespian 4/2/02 . chapter 6 ...Answers! Give me answers! Soon! More! :) |
| Lupin 4/1/02 . chapter 6 ...ITS GOOD PLZ HURRY WITH THE NEXT CHAPTER |
| DarylDawn 10/24/01 . chapter 5 Impressive. All the chapters are flowing well in plot, not too fast, not too slow. As well, Janus' character is detailed well. It's hard to get his attitude right, but you seem to have a good grasp on his complex demeanor. The grammar, etc. is good; I only noticed a few errors. Here's to hoping you keep up the excellent work. *waves scythe in the air* |
| Lord Cirenmas 10/4/01 . chapter 5 Wow! Great Story! I hope you write more soon! |
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