Hello there Kid, I recently saw Spider-Man 2 too, and I think it blew the first one all away ^_^. Anyway, the fanfic is quite good. Maybe a little bit short at some points, but anyway, update soon!

I liked the chapter :P I would just try to avoid saying you won't write if you don't get reviews, *shrugs* for some reason it seems to turn people off the story, trust me i've been around the block before :P

update soon! i like this alot

that was intresting. i do have one complaint tho. could you make your chapters longer? please? ^_^ please?

I like this story, keep updating

thats purdy cool! update soon!

cool! Evil connors! She needs to kick his **. Can't wait to see more, wings are an interesting touch, though they'd have to be pretty darn massive to lift her body

cool chapters! update soon

hey, coolio! thas prudy cool! i like that your keepin Ursla some what...human... uh, brain wise. cuz ya know in the comic the doc was all 'must kill humans! the reptiles will rule! WE ARE SUPIRIOR!' but considering hes your fav villian, you probably already know that!

Josh

hm, i like so far. but i was going to ask, was Dr. Conners minus one arm in the movie? I hadn't noticed. also, I wanted to inform you of a few tense errors mixed into your writing. sometimes when you speak of what happened(note the 'ed' of the past tense verb.) you slip into what's happening (verbs of which usually end in 's'.) I had a hard time with that for a while too, it's not a huge deal. I liked your story, tho, and I'll be checking back for more...poor Ursula! What'd she ever do to anyone?? ;o)
~Carrie

YIKES! poor ursula! great chapter, can't wait for the next one!

interesting chapter, gah gotta find out what happens next!

*cowers in corner* ahh! help me- *relizes that nobody is going to hurt me and gets up* uhh, rite *brushes off clothes* very cool chappie. continue plz

ACK! its a flying she lizard! ahh! everybody run! ah its got me! *falls over tfrom overactive imagination*
Josh

*smoke apears* *cough cough* >_< *sighs* im okay. wow! its a she lizard! cool! im seein big things commin this way! am i right or am i right?
Josh

o!very interesting. i like how your changing the plot, yet at the same time, keeping it the same. get what im sayin? o well... i am off to read chpt 3 *throws hands up* good bye! *smoke comes from no where and i disapear into it* *hack sputter cough*