A great story. Very good.

aw how sweet. its true. anakin DID bring balance to the force. in the end.

this was written well and was an original idea. i like the ending and the closing words.

May The Force Be With You.

*sits in awe* Wow... that was just lovely! Very powerful. It had this very dreamy quality to it. I almost cried when his mom appeared. A well-earned applause! And your writing is just fantastic.

Dude. That was just...wonderful! *clap clap* Bravo!

Good story!

Pretty good idea, though I'm not sure it could happen. ((Speaking in Star Wars mythos here.)) Unless I'm mistaken, when you become 'One with the Force' you no longer keep you individual sentience, the Force spirits are the wills of powerful Force users keeping themselves apart from the Force to fulfill some goal, desire, or destiny.

Either way, I enjoyed this little read; the emotion could be done better, I think, but overall it was brought across well. Keep writing, and may the Force be with you.

Carl,

This was a GREAT star wars story! Sorry you couldn't sleep...I Hope you got a better night sleep last night...looking forward to your next CREATIVE Story:)
~Love, Allison

That was great! I have often wondered about his reunion with his family and friends and i think you handled it quite well.

Err… You do know running a spell check is required, right?

About Padmé being there… She'd have to be Force-sensitive. I'm not saying she isn't. I believe she is—the one who gave Anakin the ability to absorb energy & convert it to telekenesis like he did on Cloud City, in fact. I could go into the proofs, but that would take awhile, so I won't.

Please continue writing Star Wars. :)