Can't believe I haven't reviewed this before! Beautiful and very moving. Definitely one of the best post-FIN Gabrielle stories out there.

*Tear* yay...!

Nicely characterised, deeply thought provoking, gripping narative and a good flowing read. I enjoyed the story, but I think this has the potential for much more. You've created the situation, now you need the climax and the resolution. Also, take a little more time with your word structure and grammar. It's not nearly as bad as some I've seen, but it would appear that I am a perfectionist when it comes to such things.
On the whole, good work. I hope you continue it.

Oh by the gods, how beautiful. This practically got me crying and believe me, that is a feat. Very beautiful, very sweet, very sad. The characters were great, the setting at Potedia was very well chosen and the emotions within it, they were simply beautiful. I love it. I never would have made Gabrielle the goddess of Love, especially not in this way, but in combination with the rest of the story it does seem to fit, though a small part of me still protests it. It's beautiful, absolutely.
ME

WoW! Wonderful beautiful story! I hope to read more of your stuff!

Hey Tango! It's me Jessica(FetishXX) from XOC. I thought this story looked familiar ;) Nice job on it! I liked how Aphrodite decides to become mortal, and now Gabrielle has to be Goddess of Love. Intersting!

That was beautiful Tango!

This is good, please continue

I loved it! Nice twist at the end. And I thought Ares was very well written. Kudos to you!

Thanks -- just fixed the typo!

Isn't it a good thing that I have you on Author Alert? ^^ I liked your continuation of the ending. It was an interesting take on what might happen, and you described what possibly could have happened to Ares and Aphrodite, something that caused me much concern when I originally saw the ending of the series.
I think this was the first way I saw Aphrodite give up her immortality to make Gabrielle the new goddess of love, but I could be mistaken about that. No matter, I think it's a touching detail.
The only complaint I have is that in the first paragraph you put "morning" instead of "mourning", which caused me some confusion for a moment.
Anyways, thank you, as always, for your contribution!