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| Tripleguess 2007-03-07 ch 1, | abuseThank you for an enjoyable, in-character fanfic. You caught hints of both Claus's deceptive quiet and passive exterior and the iron will beneath it. Nice work -- keep writing! ^^ |
| Syngamy 2006-02-25 ch 1, | abuse^_^ wonderful and very well-written. |
| Kisa Yamashita 2005-10-09 ch 1, | abuseReally sweet fanfiction^^ It's beautiful, thank you! |
| mycookienotyours 2005-06-19 ch 1, | abuseCool story dude, I liked it! |
| k 2005-02-22 ch 1, anon. | abuseKawaii! Yes, I think this is how Claus and Lavi would be like around each other if they got married! Nice story with a happy ending! :) |
| Godshatter 2005-01-18 ch 1, | abusevery elegant indeed |
| roguehobbit 2005-01-01 ch 1, | abuseAww, this was so sweet. Very nice, and I agree with ThebigW, you should consider continuing this. |
| Tri-Noti 2004-11-13 ch 1, | abuseYAY! I love this Anime and Ravi/Lavi is my favorite, and Claus rocks too. Thank you for writing such a wonderful story! |
| SarcasticMuse28 2004-11-08 ch 1, | abuseVery nice. ^_^ Last Exile doesn't have nearly enough fan fiction, let alone enough that is good quality... Love it. Keep writing! ~Zen |
| ThebigW 2004-08-28 ch 1, | abuseWell you HAVE to put up the followup chapter outlining the remainder of Lavie's pregnancy. The hormonal changes on top of her personality could either be almost tragic or totally hilarious (or wild oscillation between the two), depending on how it's written. C'mon. You can do it... W. |
| Tesserakt 2004-08-18 ch 1, | abuseConsidering it was very moving, veri in-character and I can't seem to find any flaws in it, this fic seems to qualify as one of the best I've ever read. Congratulations. |
| Lady Razorsharp 2004-08-15 ch 1, | abuseOh, how sweet! I especially liked the mention of Al. These two are so cute. Lavie is very much in character. Bravo! |
| Shadowfox83 2004-08-02 ch 1, anon. | abuseVery nice work. I like reading C/L fics since they make such a cute couple. Both seem in character and the ending makes me wonder who could have ruin the moment so to speak. Anyway good job. |
| Stelok 2004-07-29 ch 1, | abuseHow romantic. Claus and Lavi look great together. |
| Raven54 2004-07-27 ch 1, | abuseoi! This is good!! ^_^ I like it! Keep writing!! |