Thank you for an enjoyable, in-character fanfic. You caught hints of both Claus's deceptive quiet and passive exterior and the iron will beneath it.

Nice work -- keep writing! ^^

^_^ wonderful and very well-written.

Really sweet fanfiction^^ It's beautiful, thank you!

Cool story dude, I liked it!

Kawaii! Yes, I think this is how Claus and Lavi would be like around each other if they got married! Nice story with a happy ending! :)

very elegant indeed

Aww, this was so sweet. Very nice, and I agree with ThebigW, you should consider continuing this.

YAY! I love this Anime and Ravi/Lavi is my favorite, and Claus rocks too. Thank you for writing such a wonderful story!

Very nice. ^_^ Last Exile doesn't have nearly enough fan fiction, let alone enough that is good quality...

Love it. Keep writing!

~Zen

Well you HAVE to put up the followup chapter outlining the remainder of Lavie's pregnancy. The hormonal changes on top of her personality could either be almost tragic or totally hilarious (or wild oscillation between the two), depending on how it's written.
C'mon. You can do it...

W.

Considering it was very moving, veri in-character and I can't seem to find any flaws in it, this fic seems to qualify as one of the best I've ever read. Congratulations.

Oh, how sweet! I especially liked the mention of Al.

These two are so cute. Lavie is very much in character. Bravo!

Very nice work. I like reading C/L fics since they make such a cute couple. Both seem in character and the ending makes me wonder who could have ruin the moment so to speak. Anyway good job.

How romantic. Claus and Lavi look great together.

oi! This is good!! ^_^ I like it! Keep writing!!