cool story malfoy is too sleezy though
but the best bad boy evah!

This isn't a flame, just somethimg to try and help improve the quality of your story. There are a lot of grammar mistakes in this fic, so I suggest getting a BETA reader to check over your chapters before you sumbit them. Oh, and Blaise Zabini is a boy, thats all...

Are you writing anymore? Come on. that was a good cliff hanger. keep up. well writte.

~anaka-star

Your already on summer vacation?! you bumm! i have to wait another 17 weeks! (yes im counting) BUmm!!

-Peace.

Nice ending with the Review spelling. And it was a good story. Next Chap plz!

Tallyho!

Dude this is such a good fanfic, its the bomb!
Up-date soon please!

well thats one way to get them to kiss.

a little strange...but draco being nice is oddly apealing...WRITE MORE!

I really like this story. If you are going to add another Chapter to it, I would be so happy.

Thanx
Nicole

omg please finish! it is amaizng!! *beggs*

You should update, cuz that's a real cliff hanger. What happens? Does Draco respond? Does Hermione do something stupid and get herself pregnant?

u c wat i mean?

I luv the story, I really do, but you should really try to watch your spelling. The story may be hot, but it's better to hav the spelling right, as well. Maybe you could have a friend beta read 2 u?

Good so far, but fyi, it's "Voulez vous couchez avec moi cette soir"
Referring to the password Malfoy had given. *nods*

more!

plz? i really like it~more.

-skitziod
p.s will you read mine?

OMG! i loved ur story, it was absolutly wonderful. i can't wait till u write more, and i hop0e u do. ttul.
P.S my name is maddie
Maddie