cool story

This entire story is great, I like how you explained where the card capture tech came from and I liked how you had the King take over even so far as to split up the teams of rangers, I think he is lucky they are the good guys, and have years of experience dealing with anoying idiots under their belts.

Great story!

I have just found this story, and I really love it. I cannot wait until I can finish it.

Love it, the whole thing from beginning to end. And "The Return" is just as good and looking forward to more from that story too.

Keep up the very excellent work,

Pern

Excellent chapter and this tale deserved to come in first place, but CONGRATULATIONS on your wins!

Keep up the great work,

Pern

Excellent chapter for this tale. Waiting for more with bated breath.

Keep up the wonderfully excellent work and I'm going over to cast a vote right now.

Pern

Love it!

Another excellent chapter is this tale.

Interesting, intriguing, and (for me) very compelling reading.

Keep up the great work,

Pern

Love it! Review People Review!

Again another wonderful chapter in this excellent tale.

Keep up the good work.

Pern

O.K then this is going to be a long review, for one thing this is a very good story from where it is going, the chapters aren’t that long, in fact there of a good length, right now the story could go in to directions though, one you could focus on Rocky and Maurhee's relationship, and forget all about the power ranger stuff, 'yea I know it's kinda late to be saying this, but I only stumbled on this one chapter ago' anyway, the other direction, is Ivan and the other/new Ninjetti rangers and how they defeat him. it's your choice, but that’s just my opinion, of course weather you take the opinion of a random internet reviewer is your choice anyway, continue with the writing, because it is actually really good (oh if you are going to kill somebody else of please could it be Tommy, I just think that he doesn’t have a place in this story anymore, also it could get some interesting idea's and reactions out of Maurehee)

Thanks for taking the time to read this and once again keep writing, it is really good so far

The Simularium

Great Chapter!

Really can't wait to see where this is going.

Loved this and keep up the excellent work!

Pern

This is a terrible thing to say, but after that last scene, I kinda want Rocky to die in the end. A nice dramatic slam. It could totally get Rhee to go after Ivan hardcore.

LOVE IT!

OHMIGOSH!

I NEED MORE!