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looneygurl
2009-11-08 . chapter 2
definatly a darker take on things here, and I must say, I love the irony. This story has been "Magnificence in excelcious" my friend. Keep up the wonderfull writing!

PS. the quote is from the broadway production of Beauty and the Beast. It is one from Cogworth at the end when they are human agian.
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2008-06-27 . chapter 1
At first I thought this was really short
but after reading it
it's an interesting thought.
I liked it
Lassie-Construction-Warrior
2008-06-16 . chapter 2
A very dark story! For once, someone has taken a realistic look into the post-transformation life of Belle and her prince. Very good job!
candice
2008-03-17 . chapter 1
Very beautifully wriiten.
very dark and depressing
but in a way the story made since
i really liked it
i know you wrote this like forever ago
or.. well maybe 4 years...
but i honestly wish you wuold continue
you can actually do more with this story.
please write more fanfics
ninja-v
2008-02-29 . chapter 2
wow. that was...wow. Terribly dark and so Beautifully written. I want to cry! I had to read it twice. So so sad.
Alexander Ritter
2007-12-23 . chapter 1
I’ve got pretty much the same reaction as everyone else.. Whoa.. That was hard hitting. That was really powerful. Made me cry, as seems to be the case with many others. You really know how to bring out emotion in people who read this. Good job.
BlackShimmer
2007-06-29 . chapter 1
That was such an amazing and entertaining piece. Very short, but nicely written. :3 It was a very dark story, but I just love the idea. Great work~!
KH2girl
2007-06-15 . chapter 2
Well, that was quite a change from Happily Ever After. But still, excellent writing skills. ^.^
Allergic-to-Paradox
2007-04-15 . chapter 2
And again: Wow. *applauds*
Poor Belle. It was an elegant touch, having her not forgive him. Poor Belle. This seems much more in keeping with the way fairy tales used to be, stories for adults, not children. This wasn't quite as powerful as the first one, but still wonderful.
~Allyp
Allergic-to-Paradox
2007-04-15 . chapter 1
Whoa. Not what I was expecting.
Very beautiful, well written. It's difficult to write deep, clear and shocking all in so few words, but you pulled it off amazingly well. It always seemed like a shame that her beast changed and left her with some 'beautiful' stranger.
Amazing. It's going on my favourites list.
~Allyp
Firepelt
2007-04-12 . chapter 2
That was angsty. But, I liked how you wrote the story.


. . .

I think I'm gonna go back to reading A Series of Unfortunate Events...

But still. Sometimes you need a depressing story.

* * *

Yawn. I'm blathering, aren't I? I'll ust be on my way now...

^-^

Xeven
2007-03-04 . chapter 1
whoa.
RainbowDoll
2007-02-01 . chapter 1
You did a beautiful job with this story.
It was very creatively done, with a very original story.
Because, if you actually think about it, the prince would run around and flirt with the servants.
I mean, he's human again, wouldn't he want that feeling?
I can't express enough how amazingly well done this story was.
I loved the gothic touch
And I think the end made it perfect.
Bravo!
DearestDaughterofDarkness
2007-01-18 . chapter 1
that's sad, i never thought of that kind of ending, mine was a more happily ever after thing with happy children running about.
Erisah Mae
2007-01-08 . chapter 2
Grim, Grim, Grim. What, don't you like happy endings?
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