Reviews for Secundus: Prudence

Reviews For: Secundus: Prudence

AnExiledFrank 2006-12-28 ch 1,	abuseAh this pulls at several heartstrings for me. First it always so wonderful to see Hughes again, alive and in Canon (that is, actually alive when he's supposed to sweatdrop) and then Havoc saving the day, sort of. I don't entirely know where the idea of Havoc is the "resident paranoia agent", though I can't entirely fault that probably entirely accurate claim. When he needs to do something, he will get it done no matter what. Seems to be true of almost all under Mustang, neh? Must be his magnetic personality (heh, or should I say flaming since magnetic would work for Edward? Heh, I'll quite while I'm still ahead). Also, my mother used to smoke as well, though, God bless her, still living with me, though her father, who did smoke, died a very long time ago. Also, this story was just plain amusing. Any time the characters go squashing in the mud gives me a mental image that gives far too much amusement for my small mind than it really should. Same with showers, m, showers. >> Was wondering why it always seems to be rainy and muddy in Amestris, but the muses aren't always willing are they? Fun, just plain fun.
Psycho King 2005-01-31 ch 1,	abuseLOL, very funny... gotta love people who do the right thing without fully realizing it themselves... Onward to Virtue number 3...
Henrika 2005-01-06 ch 1,	abuseReally like this arc. You do good character insight. Keep writing!
Hosaki 2004-11-14 ch 1,	abuseCool! Havoc does seem more purdent than Huges. Huges isn't cynic enough, I think. Ah, well, really good story! I just love really good stories...SO KEEP WRITING! death glare Please? =^.^=
2004-11-14 ch 1, anon.	abuseLovely. It feels so real. Like this is the sort of situation that could actually happen. Nice. And the pass the hat thing at the end was sweet.
Edit Death 2004-10-06 ch 1, anon.	abuseThis is an excellent concept. I mean, there are embodiments of sin, why not of virtue? Keep up the good work, and please continue with this virtue series. I look forward to seeing who represents what.
kesenaibs 2004-08-06 ch 1, anon.	abuseOnce again I've been truly impressed by the characterizations and writing styles. I love this fic! (^_^). There definently aren't enough Havoc fics out in the world. I especially loved, loved, LOVED, the cig charity collection for him (^_^). It's excellant! I can't wait to see the next few virtues. You're right, I think that Havoc does fit the bill for Prudence better than Hughes, but that's just IMHO. What an excellant dedication piece!
lugiamania 2004-07-22 ch 1,	abuseYay! Another one, featuring Havoc! Oh, BTW, his frist name is actually "Jean".
Bronwen Stx 2004-07-22 ch 1, anon.	abusesweatdrop I just realized I said fortitude instead of prudence...sorry...mistake...gah.
Bronwen Stx 2004-07-21 ch 1,	abuseWow. Hee. I love these vignettes your posting. It's absolutely fantastically beautiful and the meanings in all these just really hit deep. Very powerful indeed. Liutenant Havoc representing Fortitude. Hee. What an interesting idea. But if fits and its true that Hughes does fit him in more ways than one but Havoc makes things much more interesting as 'fortitude'. Another favourites!!

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