Well, it is a very interesting point of view! Thestory was very touching and quite sad in the end. Although it is not quite how I imagine the relationships between Izayoi and the Inu no Taisho or Izayoi and Inuyasha, I enjoyed the story very much!
Good work!

OH MY GOD.
She commits suicide?
I love this story so much! I read it before, but I didn't get through with it, and I had to go, so I closed the page, forgetting to favorite this story! Now that I found it, I just say how well you portrayed Izayoi. I actually cannot stress enough that I am such a big fan of your work! :)

It made me cry, but I loved it none the less. Good job.

Wow, u definitely won the contest, no doubt.
Really bitter-swet, going on my favorites :)

I'm crying like a baby! This is the second of your fics that makes me cry... but... i love it!!

You rock girl!!

Congratulations!!

XOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOX

Diana

Some spelling errors, but whatev. I like Izayoi's account very much, and I enjoyed your portrayl of Inu no Taishou. This reminds me of a shortened version of those "Royal Diaries" books, where an author chooses a princess and writes a diary with cultural references to tell an inspiring story a slightly different way.
As always with your work, faved.

This was beautiful. And completely believable. Poor InuYasha... I feel bad for him, now. Because, seriously, this probably happened. I mean, it would explain so much. Why he's so tortured (besides the fact that he is hanyo), so touchy about his mother, and why he's so... confused. It makes sense, even though it's sad. Realistic, too. I would give anything to believe that Izayoi was the best mother in the world - happy, loving, caring - but, in reality, she probably wasn't. Shew as exiled from her race and from the race of her mother, hated by her family and her son's father's family... I wouldn't be surprised if she ended her own life and left InuYasha on his own. Sad, but realistic. It makes perfect sense. Good job. I'm looking forward to reading more of your work! :D

That. Was. Amazing! I can honestly say that this is one of the best InuYasha fanfictions I've ever read. It's so...touching, and emotional. It is interesting to read a story from Izayoi's P.O.V. We don't hear about her too much, especially in fanfictions. And even more amazing is the fact that this could have actually happened! Great work.

Im still not sure of the right words to convey this but, this sounds like something that actually would have happened, with the glimpses we get of their personalities and that definately sounds like a younger Inuyasha.

Man that was good. It wasn't like anything else you've written, but it still had a flare to it that just made it...wow. Her emotions, her sadness, you could feel all of it as if the entire scene was playing in front of your eyes. it was beautiful.
I like how you put different characters subtly into the storyline too (like Kikyo). That was creative. And even though Izayoi was so young it didn't seem all pedophile-ish or anything. It really put meaning to "Age ain't nothing but a number"
Basically, long story short, it was AMAZING.

i cant beleiev u wrote that...and it can actually be what really intended to happen...i started crying from the moment inu no taisho died...and it just kept coming after that. I honestly bellieve that if rumiko takahashi read this she'd put it as what actually happened in inuyasha. its so sad, and look, still crying. Your an excelent writer but I can't beleiev she resorted to that...but...i dont entirely blame her...i loved this so much...but hopefully someone does love him-kagome...

This was really deep and it's a nice change to read something about Izayoi and from her point of view.

wow this is way deeper than any fanfic i have ever read. i mean like it was so deep im speechless good job and write more like this. the journal entries really take you in more.

how sad... I'm sad now... but i still loved the story

I loved how you presented the story. The simple honesty of the main character was very profound. I wish you would do more stories with izayoi.