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| Phantomstar4456 2008-07-08 ch 1, | abuseThat. Was. Amazing! I can honestly say that this is one of the best InuYasha fanfictions I've ever read. It's so...touching, and emotional. It is interesting to read a story from Izayoi's P.O.V. We don't hear about her too much, especially in fanfictions. And even more amazing is the fact that this could have actually happened! Great work. |
| ChimearaGrand 2008-06-27 ch 1, | abuseIm still not sure of the right words to convey this but, this sounds like something that actually would have happened, with the glimpses we get of their personalities and that definately sounds like a younger Inuyasha. |
| SapphireStones 2008-04-18 ch 1, | abuseMan that was good. It wasn't like anything else you've written, but it still had a flare to it that just made it...wow. Her emotions, her sadness, you could feel all of it as if the entire scene was playing in front of your eyes. it was beautiful. I like how you put different characters subtly into the storyline too (like Kikyo). That was creative. And even though Izayoi was so young it didn't seem all pedophile-ish or anything. It really put meaning to "Age ain't nothing but a number" Basically, long story short, it was AMAZING. |
| AngelofMist 2008-03-08 ch 1, | abusei cant beleiev u wrote that...and it can actually be what really intended to happen...i started crying from the moment inu no taisho died...and it just kept coming after that. I honestly bellieve that if rumiko takahashi read this she'd put it as what actually happened in inuyasha. its so sad, and look, still crying. Your an excelent writer but I can't beleiev she resorted to that...but...i dont entirely blame her...i loved this so much...but hopefully someone does love him-kagome... |
| Affinitive 2008-02-03 ch 1, | abuseThis was really deep and it's a nice change to read something about Izayoi and from her point of view. |
| Taraah36 2007-11-30 ch 1, | abusewow this is way deeper than any fanfic i have ever read. i mean like it was so deep im speechless good job and write more like this. the journal entries really take you in more. |
| crazycid 2007-11-03 ch 1, | abusehow sad... I'm sad now... but i still loved the story |
| Amadoni 2007-08-16 ch 1, | abuseI loved how you presented the story. The simple honesty of the main character was very profound. I wish you would do more stories with izayoi. |
| Crystal Twilight 2007-07-19 ch 1, | abuseThis was really good. I wish that the manga or the anime would give us more information on Inuyasha's mother and father's relationship. I believed your story. Very nice work. |
| Sesshoumaru Minion 2007-07-08 ch 1, | abuseThis is...really sad. I love how you show the dark side of Izayoi. Thanks for posting! |
| harrypocky 2007-06-20 ch 1, | abuseaw, sad. xD |
| kodaku 2007-06-11 ch 1, | abuseI'm soo depressed! But this is really good! It makes sense but being the romantic that i am, i had hoped she would at least have some time with Inuyasha's dad before she died. |
| Hanna-chan17 2007-05-01 ch 1, | abuseoh how sad *tears up* so very sad i want to cry...*starts to cry* it so sad but so beautiful i love it! |
| Owl of the Night 2007-04-29 ch 1, | abuseOh My God! i... i... i just don't know what to write. Poor Izayoi. She loved Inu Sr. so much. and POOR INUYASHA! Iz drank the tea. the tea that killed her. *crying-in-a-corner-now* |
| Ami 2007-04-26 ch 1, anon. | abuseyou cant see it but im crying right now, made me laugh at some points to. i loved it |