Graet story! That what I think!

That was fairly good. It could have been alittle more descriptive. I think it would have been even better if you had added more description to it. You know what I mean? I like your writing style. I will look forward to more of your stories.

This is very good...hat kind of resolution you will come up with is beyond me...but I can't wait to find out:D

Eh, this is very sad, not something that i should have read right now, cause im not feeling to well, but i stiliked it very much.

Okay, to answer everyone's questions...Damien Shepard, I am hoping to make another one! Maybe not a sequel, but perhaps a prequel...I don't know as of yet. I've been strongly concentrating on my other stories and the Hayate/Himeno I will be writing soon for the most part...so I don't know. If you've got any ideas for a sequel to this, let me know, but until I can come up with something, I think I'll have to leave this alone...

kerricarri, yes, Himeno's family does know she's Pretear. I forget what episode it was, one of the last ones, but she does Pret right in front of them. I'm not too happy with their reaction though...

KeyQuis, thank you for reviewing my songfics! And I hope when my version of 'Mind Forest' goes up, you'll review that as well! (Mind Forest would be the Hayate/Himeno I was talking about, everyone!)

Okay, thank you all for reviewing! And if there ever is a sequel, I hope you all read it!

wow...

Ahh, the whole story came together at the end. It was an interesting read. I reread the prequel...it all makes sense now.

short story, but it was alright

well... true it was short, and it didn't really leave a desirable feeling at the end but it was still good! I was confused though, it was well written but not enough detail for my tastes actually. and I know the basic storyline of episodes 8-13 cuz I read from three different sites what happened, and Himeno's family actually does know that she's Pretear (I think) because she transformed in front of them, I don't know if they know the details such as the Leafe Knights and all but they've seen her Pret. but still, I liked how the whole story went and all (and I'd appreciate it if you read my Fruits Basket fanfic! -if you've read/seen Fruits Basket of course ) I'm sorry, but I want more reviewers oh yeah, and a question, what does 'Umarekawaru' mean? 'born again'? I don't know any Japanese...

If this really is the last chapter, TELL ME THAT THERE WILL BE A SEQUEL! I MUST KNOW MORE! That's just how good these two stories are!

ok I liked this chapter! I have a soft spot for entries from journels and such I wondered who this Okan was (did I spell it right..?) but it turns out to be Sasame, but how is Sasame here...? oh I forgot everything! @.@ ...anyway... KEEP IT UP!

hi! I didn't realize you updated ;; right now I found that out that you added two more chapters! anyway I really like it though I'm not so used to chapters being so short... I guess that's ok anyway keep going!

HURRY WRITE please hurry i want to know!

who does she reconise! *goes mad* I can't take it!

other than that, lol, it was very good and i want to here the next chappie soon! :D

ok... now I'm starting to think that this 'mysterious man' is either Natsue's former husband/Sasame T_T try not to make the 'mysterious man' more like Sasame if you're not intending to make him anything like Sasame, and wouldn't the right word instead of 'small' for Mr. Tanaka be... oh I don't know... 'short'?

whoa... I now realize that... HIMENO'S MOM'S BACK! well, I knew she was back... but it just didn't sink in ya know? anyway I feel sorry for her, not knowing that she was dead... it's all confusing, and by any chance is Himeno somehow going to contact any of the LK or her mom? somehow? someway? ah... I'm confusing myself... anyway good story!