 GreenEyedFloozy 2005-03-15 . chapter 1*Starts to cry again* |
 M&S Forums 2004-09-14 . chapter 1 It was exetremely powerful. Like a highlight over the the inner-most just between love, pain, and the hope that binds us to the ever-nearing future.
("M&S Forums" is an official tie to K-Pop group S.H. (a.k.a. "The Myth") although M&S forums does not own the company, neither does it own the S.H. stars who previously made their U.S. debut.) |
 Ob53zt 2004-09-12 . chapter 1i love this poem! ^-^ this is one of the most creative Kenshin poems i've read, yet. i loved how you pictured Battousai as an angry monster...very cool...i'm gonna be reviewing more of your stuff in the future...it's great!
ps: i just wanted to thank you for your review and that it really lifted my thoughts on that poem...
!n@ |
 Uotani the fishie 2004-08-13 . chapter 1aw so poetic (i cant do dat) i luv it i think u shuld continue coz its so good :] |
 White Rabbit Tale 2004-08-05 . chapter 1It's perfect as a one-shot, but it COULD work in multi-chapters.
Anyway, I just want to congratulate you for this wonderful idea of a poetic story. It's truly excellent, fantastically written! It's a realistic yet powerful emotional trip. It's simply lovely. |
 xZig-zagx 2004-07-21 . chapter 1Man! I could never write stuff like this I'd go crazy! That was very good!! |
 tmarauder 2004-07-21 . chapter 1ha! this is very poetic. at first it sounded like another poem, but as i read more it was definately a poetic story.
i've only had one nightmare that i know of, and the poor rurouni has soo many. he might want to get counseling.
I liked all the poetic parts and stuff, but it was kinda confusing in some parts, but understandable if thought about. but i am not a poetic person so maybe it was just me. ? |
 Cleo Marineb 2004-07-21 . chapter 1 THANK YOU!
I THINK THIS FIC WAS GREAT, AWESOME!! I LOVED IT, KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!
(I THINK WRITING A POETIC FIC IT'S MUCH TOUGHER, BUT WHAT DO I KNOW NE)
IT'S EASY FOR ME NOT FOR YOU, (I THINK I LIKE DRAMA TOO MUCH, A FRIEND TOLD THAT'S THE WAY SOMETIMES I TEND TO WRITE) ^_^!
kEEP IT UP!! |