 Dreams Of Ice 2008-05-19 . chapter 1 This was just wonderful, I'm a bit of a snob when it comes to fanfiction. I've been spoiled by being an avarice reader of actual fiction. This however was lovely, and extremely well written. Thank you for adding a lovely repreive in an otherwise dreary day. |
 Branswilliam Rochester 2007-12-31 . chapter 1I loved it, loved it, loved it! The ending letter was priceless!
Wonder what'll happen to their relationship after a month...great job! |
 Texas Dragon 2006-06-25 . chapter 1YEE-HAW DO it again man that was awsome! |
 Severess 2004-10-12 . chapter 1I reviewed a few months ago, but I just wanted to let you know that I've read quite of few more works by others and this is still by far the best story I've read on any of the fiction sites. I've just recommended your story to someone who's new to the site. I'm sure she'll love it. Again, thanks for sharing your talent! |
 jaded gypsy 2004-09-27 . chapter 1 That was absolutely beautiful.
I was so happy to finally find a realistic in-character romantic interaction between Hermione and Severus- it's incredibly rare on fanfic- and I really appreciated the subtlety and how you didn’t over-analyse their relationship or spend time on them mooning over each other like overly hormonal thirteen year-olds or shaging like bunnies.
This story was incredibly mature and beautiful.
Just beautiful. |
 Aly 2004-08-28 . chapter 1 Wow! I really loved this story! I wish you would continue it. |
 Nore 2004-07-29 . chapter 1It's 1:10 (am) and I just finished reading your story, I couldn't stop... I had to know!
I realy loved it! I hope I'll make sweet dreams inspired by your story.
Sleep well you too!
Nore |
 faerluthio 2004-07-24 . chapter 1heh heh- LMAO! I like it, I like it a lot! |
 Bluefurryelf 2004-07-23 . chapter 1Poor Seamus! ;-) Oh, I loved this one! It's absolutly great!
Hey, what about a sequel? |
 Morner 2004-07-22 . chapter 1 I've never before reviewed a story on ff.net though I've read many. However, this was very good- sucked me in right from the first. Please keep writing! |
 Severess 2004-07-22 . chapter 1(First, let me say that the only thing I didn't really agree with in this story is Malfoy dancing in his boxers in the middle of a crowd. It just doesn't seem like something a Slytherin would do no matter how drunk he is.)
Other than that all I can really say is WOW! I was completely captured by this story. I stumbled onto this site accidentally and this makes me wish I had found it sooner! The graceful and almost seamless way H leaves her childhood and enters adulthood in one day is a great way to lead up to the scene with S & H dancing. It's difficult to write a passionate scene without it coming out like ** or just plain corny, but this was perfect! I could almost feel the chemistry between the two as they came closer and closer together and I discovered that I was holding my breath without realizing it just like H did at one point. The way you left the readers to use their imaginations as to what happens next was a perfect ending and I'm almost afraid a follow up chapter would spoil the images the reader is left with. But I must admit that I'm curious to see your point of view on what comes next.
I loved your story and hope to read more from you soon! (And I definitely agree with Suzanne: for MANY reasons, work was probably not the best place to read this! Sitting in a straight back chair under flourescent lights didn't do the story the justice it deserves!) |
 PengiKel 2004-07-22 . chapter 1huzzah! I really liked this. V. well written. |
 ParvisSira 2004-07-22 . chapter 1So wonderful and sweet. Loved it. I liked the charaters internal monologues, bravo! |
 Susanne 2004-07-22 . chapter 1This is brilliant!! I loved the way the story was subtly bringing them together, so in character, so mistrusting, but reacting to each other. It made me laugh out loud and have tears in my eyes- work was possibly not the best place to read this fic .
Well done, and please, please do a sequel. I've added to you to my fav author list, something as rare as hen's teeth.
Susanne |
 Eyes of Smoke 2004-07-21 . chapter 1ohh! Hermoinie sanpe coolneess!
good chapter! |