Prunella calling someone a selfish brat. How incredibly ironic.

A great story, hilarious lines, and Muffy is Muffy, and not the corpulent, nymphomaniac Uma Thurman impersonator that's so prevalent in other stories involving her.

I like the whole irony involving the clone, with him being ** at Muffy, when he himself is Muffy (in mind only, I mean).

One last thing, kind of trivial-- I don't think "Truth or Dare" is really something that's played at boys' slumber parties. It's more of something that would be played at girl parties, or, most likely, boy/girl parties.

Great story. I really love the whole concept of a Muffy clone, but as a boy... ^^ Very cool

You write Muffy really well. You have a good grasp of her character...the rudeness and selfishness, as well as the, ah, crybabyness...but you make her pretty sympathetic, all things considered.
Poor Dwayne. It must suck to be her. Him. Uh, you know what I mean.

loved the story, I've just finished the story, and I thought it was sweet, dramatic, and funny.

Hi, it's one of your big fans again! :)
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Good story. Very confusing... but fascinating. Again with the dreams though??
At least this had a tricky ending with that one unanswered question.. lol.

Wow. That was confusing. But nevertheless a good story.

Funny chapter. Job well done! I guess the next logical thing will be for a girl to ask Dwayne out.

Heh heh, I thought you were through with writing gender bending fics ;). Not that I'm complaining, this one is great so far, it's an original idea and you write these types of stories so well.

Can't wait for more :)

Geez, Muffy. He's only been a boy for, like, a day. Give him a break.
I'm liking what I'm reading so fat! Hope to see more.

Pretty funny story. It's amazing how you recreate Muffy's personality.

Another fantastic story. Hope to see more.

Hehe, good start so far.
I don't see why Muffy-- uh, Dwayne-- is so down on her life being over. It's not like the real Muffy is dead or anything... she's living in the same house as he is!

interesting... I think this will make a interesting Multi Chapter story, I did something quite different when changing Muffy into a boy, please write more