this is a very cool take on this story and i can't wait till you post more of it
if there is more out there could you post a link

please update soon can not wait to see what happens next between Salzaar and lily. Very unique and great story. I have yet to read anything like this which makes it 10 times more interesting.

It's supposed to say - on adultfanfic (.) net

sorry for the missing words...

I've enjoyed this story very much. I read it off your account on and I'm very impressed with the work you've done for this story and I was wondering if you were ever thinking about writing an epilogue of sorts? I'm going to be wondering about all the stuff that wasn't finished through Lily's vision...this story is just made itself one of my all time faves!

^_^ Elhonna

Please update soon. I want to find out what happens next.

Your beta missed so much. I found mistakes all over the place.


-jw`chan

Ew... somehow I knew that, that was coming.


-jw`chan

Very wonderful I love it :) I hope you update soon.

eh...I hope Lily dosen't end up with Potter.

I like!

Just a little thing I noticed, the plural of dice is die.

Please update soon.

It's, "The dice are cast."

A die is one of a set of dice. To cast is to banish or throw away.


-jw`chan ^-^

Why does Lily have to still marry Potter? After the grief his ancestors gave her a thousand years ago, along with the hell he personally gave her himself before her trip to the past, I'd think she'd avoid any chance of marrying him. *lol* I say she should avoid having those visions come true by staying single, and simply move to another country and hide out with Harry, until she can find a way back to the past to be with Salazar again. If she lets herself get killed like she did in the vision, she's NEVER see Salazar again and Harry will never get to know his real dad. The visions can't come true unless she LETS them come true, I say. *lol*

This story is AMAZING! I can't wait for more!

LOL!