Very nice. I enjoyed every chapter of it.

They tried to be heroes - and failed. They tried to be villains - and failed again. They tried to be both - and failed yet again, twice over. So doesn't that leave, as the only logical option, being neither? By that I mean, remaining as realistically neutral as possible.

OMG - Sara Bellum has been found out by the government to be a corrupted politician; will wonders never cease? :P LOL.

_ So Professor Zeighger IS Professor Utonium - I mean, Zeighger is Professor Zeighger's first name, and his full name is Zeighger Utonium? (Cool name, IMHO. :) ). Nice to see Bunny back - but who is Bunny's master that she's fairly loyal too, and why did he bring Bunny back anyway?

...OK. So Bubbles transforms into her ultimate form (meanwhile leaving Shell and Gel behind to continue ravaging the cities - and they get beaten by Buttercup and Blossom respectively), and then just when she's attained her perfect form, she's destroyed effortlessly by someone/something even MORE powerful? _ Looking forward to more, especially finding out who this new being is who destroyed Deus Bubbles...unless that WAS Deus Bubbles destroying her earlier form (suicide? :D).

Ah, so that's what that's about. Don't worry about gits like that - you get them everywhere on the net (and in real life) - all you can do is ignore them and hope they go away and/or get a life. :D

Thank god that Barbara got to Butch before he actually went through with his suicide attempt - would a razor blade work on a ruff anyway (unless maybe it's made of duranium... :) )?

Yay - good ol' Bloss is back, and she's kicking butt! :D :D Clever way to wash blood off the walls. And I can understand you wanting to write a spicier NC-17 version (pity FFNet banned them a couple of years ago) - your best bet would be w.adultfanfiction.net for posting that up when the time comes. :)

Huh? I worked out what the riddle was saying, but I don't think I understand it. :

And for once, the government got off their backsides and acted quickly in the Citysville crisis - but will their wall and cutting off all links with the outside world be enough to stop th spread of this new and even deadlier Demon virus?

Yeah, it sucks trying to get help from people and finding their not around to give help. O well...sleeping at the crime scene? OK, I can think of a million places less disturbing to sleep than there...

Please continue. :)

Wow, that Bubbles virus sure did infect things rapidly - I was left wondering momentarily how it managed to infect everything, organic or not but then it hit me - the nanobots in her body that have become part of the Bubbles virus.

I'm not surprised that Blossom is scared of the possibility of becoming even more powerful than she is already - she's pretty damn powerful now.

Good job on the diamond haul - why are they stealing diamonds, anyway? 'Cos they want lots of pretty shiny things, or 'cos they're a means to doing something else later? And I like that Carteropolis law as well. :D The subtext conversation was interesting - and very revealing about their relationship, too.

Looking forward to more soon, Milleniumenjimon. :D

...so Bubbles' body has created a completely unstoppable form of the demon virus - one with Chemical X superpowers? That's just what the world needs - another unstoppable virus. :(

Yeah, I figured Carteropolis was a reference to either Chris Carter or President Carter, I just wasn't sure which one. :)

This was brilliantly written, Milleniumenjimon - some minor typos (using the wrong word for instance, such as "swore" instead of "sore"), and some of your sentences tend to run on quite a bit (tip: too many and's in one sentence makes it run on. Try starting a new sentence. It'll make the story seem faster paced, too...)

Wow, their lives really are shit at the moment, aren't they? Buttercup is moving to Carteropolis (nice name, BTW) with Princess to hopefully start a new life, at least for a while, Bubbles has become depraved as she is completely free of all restrictions now that Bloss has left, and where the heck HAS Blossom gone, anyway?

Well, now I'm gonna go read the start of the sequel; TTFN though. :D

I'm glad to see your back, Milleniumenjimon. I really enjoy your stories and this one is no exception. Your writing just keeps on getting better and better. Keep up the good work.

And once more - we see just how screwed up everyone's lives are in this wonderful new world that the Powerpuffs live in.

All of it seems like it COULD forseeably happen - except for Miss Bellum, although taking charge of Townsville from the deceased Mayor, being a corrupt druggie committing citycide (effectively killing off a city financially? :D I made the word and up, so sue me... :P).

Why did Buttercup turn to a life of crime in Citysville? And BTW, was that the Professor in the very last scene of the chapter?

Poor Buttercup - I don't know if I'd be happy or sad at losing superpowers (assuming I had them to begin with, that is). But given how much Buttercu liked having and using her powers, I'd say it's a bad thing for her. At least she and Princess have each other.

So Blossom was infected by the demon virus (is that right?) and it mutated her, but how exactly? Rather I mean, what exactly did it mutate her into? And wh ydoes Bubbles want a sample of the demon virus to use on Buttercup jsut in case she's there with Princess? She'd really do that to her own sister? _

OK, who was that patient, and how were they able to just get up and walk out like that? Obviously not in as bad a shape as the doctor assumed... :)

So, this is a several years after the prologue and Buttercup has turned to committing crimes, has she? Why?

Also, are you saying that Bubbles raped Princess a couple of years ago, as she is now contemplating doing it again? And surely Blossom, of all people, would consider legal emancipation to be a last resort and would believe that they should have at least some sort of a parental figure in their day-to-day lives? IMHO, anyway. :)

Keep up the good work, Milleniumenjimon. :D

Honestly Milleniumjimon, I have absolutely no idea why your PPG stories keep getting removed; they certainly don't violate any of FFNet's rules concerning what sort of posting isn't allowed. O well...perhaps you should also put your stories up on another site this time, in case they get removed again for no reason?

That was brilliantly written - much better even than last time. :D I think it helped that the first half of the chapter, where she was preparing to commit suicide, was done from her POV instead of third person; helped to make it all the more real. Well, hope to see more soon. :D

continue...

interesting beginning. I want to see it grow.