WOW! That last chapter was so good. I actually read the new chapter right when it was released but I kept forgetting to review. I only remembered now cause I just watched Red Dragon for the first time. Made me think of this. :D Which is weird cause when this chapter had come out, I had just finished watching Hannibal Rising for the first time. Prolly like my favorite out of all the Hannibal movies. Are you ever going to go into Kai's past like they did with Hannibal? I think that'd be really interesting to see how Kai evolved into what he is now. Just a thought.

But, yeah, back to this chapter. It was pretty fucking intense. You really know how to do your cliffhangers. The whole time I was reading that part with that bitch McGregor I kept thinking 'oh, shit. Kai is going to be pissed. McGregor is going down.' Like, Kai got mad from a kiss. Shit is gonna hit the ceiling. I'm so excited. McGregor needs another limb cut off. I really love this story. I've read other crime fanfiction and none of them are as good. Like, it's not even the 'oh, Kai and Tala are so sexy together' that keeps you reading (even though those parts are good too). It's the story that's so good. Everyone's trying to deduce who did it. It's really fun. That doesn't happen very often. Good job! :D

omg, this story is just AMAZING! Seriously you are so friggin amazing! Please update soon, I can't wait for the rest, it is the best story I have read ever on the internett!

the only hting i cansay is poor tala and WOW this story is different and i love it!

i hope johnny gets his ass kicked and that tala ends up ok cause i dont want him screwed up because of the jerk!

Girl, I just have to tell you: I've never, EVER read a fanfiction as great as this one. I started reading it a very long time ago,maybe more than one and a half year ago, and because you didn't update it I gave up on it, but it's been on my mind and I forgot the name on the story but searched all over the M rated fanfictions on Beyblade to find it again, and Im just so glad I was able to find it! And to see that a few chapters been added since I read it last time! I love the way you've written Kai, and he suits so perfect in this role. Pretty please, finish this story T.T Im sure lots of people want you to! Love, Iudicium

OMG. That last scene was soo sad. Please please please update soon. This is totally adding fuel to the fire ;)

oh dearest.. =( I have been longing for a new chapter for ages! Damn you woman, I can`t stop thinking about this story! I have followed you for so long and I aint planning on stopping any time soon (I adore you!), but please PLEASE give me something here! xD I don`t wanna bother you or anything, I have no idea what situasion you might be in. Since I don`t know the context of this I wont say anything more about that... Just want you to know I am hoping you will feel you have time and inspiration to write more soon :)

Update! I beg of the

heyy great story so far. Took me a while to get through it all but I really like it. I hope Johnny gets what's coming to him!
Please hurry and update!

~SD

hi ^^

I started reading this about 3 days ago - but simply couldn't stop - it's really a great story - I'm impressed!

I hope the next chapter is arround the corner ^^
I think I've got almost obsessed with this story - it's amazing!

just had to say ~

thanks
this has actually brought back some of my creativity ^^

Woah...Johnny must die D=< I couldn't believe he did that, as the others said...I hope Kai beats the crap out of him or even kills him! On a happier note, your story is very awesome:D I love how your writing it. I can't wait for the next chapter, it's making me crazy thinking of whats going to happen next <3

Oh My God! This is such an amazing (and very detailed) story. I really feel and connect with the characters, especially our darling Tala. In the last chapter, I found myself shouting at Tala to lash out or hurt Johnny or something - you reduced me almost to tears.

I look forward to what you have instore :)

HELL this is da godamn best story iv read in years.i am so in love wid it.im checking it evry day. please please please update FAST or ill die of the suspense!so hope kai slaughters johnny. bty kais mine! *giggles*.

xoxoxoxox
frm girlie me.

"The nose,dude!Michael,sock him in the nose!"

Ok, I love this story so much! It is my absolute favorite on FF. And I have to ask, are you ever gonna update? I hope so, because I CAN'T get enough of this story! It should have been a book that you could buy, it's just that good! I even have a friend that isn't into slash, that reads this story and she loves it!


So...PLEASE UPDATE!


I'm checking for updates every day.


Hugs Elisabeth

This Story Has Set The Bench Mark For All The Other Fanfics. It's Amazing. It;s My Favourite Fic Of All Time.
It's A True Masterpiece.
I Love How Tala And Kais's Relationship Has Been Padded Out, I Can't Wait For Things To Really Heat Up Between Them... And I Am Very Impressed As Of How (Unlike Other Fics) You Are Taking Your Time With Them, Keeping Us Readrers In Constant Suspence.
I Hope Dear Johnny Get's Battered, Kai Was So Eager To Be The One To Break Tala.. He's Going To Be Furious :D If He Could Smrll Michael On Tala Then There's No Way He Cannot Smell Mr. Megregor.
I Hope You Update Soon,

Holy...

Didn't see that part coming, not at all, but damn was it an effective way to end the chapter. Can't wait to read more.

Also, adored this line :D

“The nose, dude! Michael, sock him in the nose!”