Even if i clearly saw that this hasn't been up-dated since last year, I still read it and now...I want an up-date...-_-;; You're so mean for just leaving it like that...But I'm sure there are plently of things going on in your life. So I wouldn't be annoying about wanting an up-date.

HOT! Please write more chapters or a sequel!

Oh gosh, when I started this story.. I didn't quite realise at first that it was, well, -you- who wrote it. But then I accidentally glanced at the author and almost kicked myself for missing it.

This was unbelievable. I know I searched for a good Ray x Tala story for a long time, and I can't believe how I never saw this.

It seems that all the stories I read from you, seem to best any other fics in the fandom they belong to.

I hope you still haven't forgotten this one, awaiting any updates.

Thank you!

- Nyx.

can't you hear this story crying out update me update me!

Wow, this is a really great story, and I think you are an amazing writer. It's stories and writers like you that need to get their stuff published, because people would totally buy this book. You should really continue with where this story is going! I want to see the next chapter up! Haha.

This is not going to be good for either one of them if anybody finds out. I think it is good for Tala though. I think he needs something like this. I think it moved a little too fast for him, but what is done is done.

What is Tala going to do now though? He was just starting to upon up more now. Will be back off after this? I can see Ray being the one on top when they first start a relationship, but once Tala becomes more comfortable with it I can see him moving to being top.

Ah, I love this chapter! I loved the moment that Tala and Ray had here at the end. I think it was a big step forward in their relationship.

Question. What language are they speaking? We know that the White Tigers don't know Russian, so am i to take it that Tala knows Chinesse? There goes Lee with his hot headed attitude again. That will push everyone away, but he will only blame it on someone else, namely Tala.

Ah I'm alreay loving this and it's only the second chapter. This is defiantly so far believavle. I look forward to further interaction between them all.

Aww Drama.

How I loves it.

And eagerly await the next chapter.
...
whenever it may come into existence!

I have absolutely no idea what to say. It was amazing. The whole story. So many emotions ran through me and I almost felt like I was THERE. That was amazing. Gosh, you have no idea how stunned I am.

ja ne ~
Kivea

O.O Wow...

I go with the D-line I have here. D'oh! Come on! I can't believe how people leave these cliffhangers to kill their readers!

This story is so amazing. I love how you build up to the lemon :D I can't wait to read the next chapter.