Nicely done. I do believe I have a new addition to my favorites list.

That, on the other hand, was pretty damn clever, although somewhat more ... extreme and convoluted ... than other similar plots I've seen executed. But let that not be taken as deriding your idea, it was lots of fun.

I don't know if this has been pointed out to you yet, but you are factually incorrect when you have Soun Tendo testify that he was unaware of Ryoga's curse.

In Vol. 2, pgs. 58-59, he is in the furo. He watches as P-chan enters the hot water, and Ryoga exits. Soun is not known for brain power, but it doesn't take a genius to connect the dots.

Considering that Akane takes P-chan to the breakfast table as depicted on pg. 42, I also don't think he could reasonably be unaware of his daughter's pet pig at the time. Again, Soun isn't the brightest bulb, but considering how eager he is to accuse people of messing with his daughters you'd think he'd at least follow up on this coincidence.

Also, you're too mean to Ryoga. In particular, I'm critical of the fact that you depict him as peeping, when he's terminally shy even late in the manga.

hey u cant pare nabikie and ranma its not right! plz pyt them back together plz

yes, yes he did. he used his pig form to sleep withakane and hes calling ranma a pervert! bad Ryoga

To make matter's worse,
[matters]

You finished eating five minutes ago and have been staring at your food ever since."
[If she _finished_ eating, would there still be food there to stare at?]

Akane was running a little, she didn't want to get caught in the rain
[Why does she care? You mentioned that she took an umbrella]

I've been called 'hentai' and 'baka'
[Obligatory Japanese]

as soon as one of them touched him, that Kuno would be under my spell, and then I would have him kill off all of Furinkan High, and then conquer Japan.
[I don’t think Kuno would have the self-control (even assuming his stupidity accepts this lame story).]

Akane rested her hand against smooth stone. "… Mother."
[Um…okay, I realized there was going to be a load of song and dance around the issue until it was revealed at the end, and I’m glad that it’s not an OC being crammed in to replace the fiancée brigade, but I still don’t get the sense of this working.]

I tried to read through chapter 2, but the story was too contrived. Ranma was within character (the circumstances were straining), and Akane’s within acceptable margins. However, all of the other characters have had more drastic changes. Soun, Genma, Nabiki, Kasumi have small enough parts that it’s difficult to tell and they fit more towards ‘neutral’, but the treatment towards Shampoo, Cologne, and Ukyo are unabashedly noncanon. I don’t care who you’re a fan of, expecting respect to _all_ of the characters shouldn’t be that much of an expectation.

PWP can mean 1. Plot What Plot? 2. ** with plot. or 3. ** without plot. also great story

I absolutely LOVE this chapter! from start to finish it's a blast! the way you showed the memories to Kasumi's teasing to akane's reaction to ranmas memories. brilliant.

I just finished your story, and although there was the random grammatical error and misplaced word, I found it thoroughly enjoyable and satisfying...good job! I'm left wanting more...

hey bud - i just got finished reading your story for the 3rd time (Ranma's morning confession) and once again absolutely love it. you have pinned down banter between characters perfectly and expertly funny.

I love this story and I am rereading it for the fourth time... but just a little thing... In the Chaos gods all babbling earlier in the chapter... Artemis is the patron goddess to amazons not Athena. Just a minor thing but I am pretty hung up on Greek Mythology.

Other than that!!

LOVE IT!

Meh, the transition to english and then japanese for some one liners or words kind of make it not as authentic? Though that's just my opinion so bleh. Shut up could have worked just as good though would probably sound mean in a way. :x

Aww, I can't help feel a bit sorry for Ukyou. She was my favorite fiance before the wedding fiasco and still pretty much tied with Akane afterwards. D: I hope she doesn't get as bad a treatment as Ryouga or left emotionally scarred. D: The one thing I always thought she had if Ranma ever left her would be Konatsu even though he was pretty much a Mousse but treated nicer. To take even that away and leave her alone with pretty much nothing left but her restaurant is more cruel than Shampoo who at least has her grandmother.

From one extreme to the next, you sure don't disappoint. It does feel a bit frantic and fast paced however kind of like an intense roller coaster ride that was built wrong. Wrong in the sense that it shouldn't exist due to it being too intense to be used as a ride. Very intense indeed. Well, love it so far and while I don't exactly hate Ryouga, there is nothing that I like about him either. Grudgingly acknowledge his strength however. :/

I'm pretty sure he doesn't die but I can't quite remember what happens to him, nor what happens to Ukyou as well. Did it have something to do with Nadoka? o_o