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SaiyaLoveHatake
2009-04-17 . chapter 10
Okay! I have read the rest of the story and... It's great! keep up the good work
SaiyaLoveHatake
2009-04-17 . chapter 4
Hey this is pretty good stuff! Lol I'll have to read the rest later though...
Pirate-chan
2009-02-08 . chapter 10
hey hey, i love it! but c'mon...i'm a cliff here! this story is great! cant wait for more!
JDanielle
2007-08-21 . chapter 1
good job
Nikki Ross
2007-05-21 . chapter 10
Awesome story!! Hope ya post soon. can't wait to see what happens next. :-)
BinkaWV
2005-10-27 . chapter 10
WOW!
moonie016
2005-09-24 . chapter 10
Hey Im lovin it so far keep going with it. Fairh reminds of Karai if you keep up with the new season of the TMNT. Leo tests her honor a lot excpt at the end of the 3rd season in Exodus..plz update soon
techgeekster
2005-05-06 . chapter 10
You gotta seriously hurry up with the next chapter! Gish!:P FYI, I am a total Donatello freak, ignore the name, only temporary
The REAL Cheese Monkey
2005-04-15 . chapter 10
Oh, what's on the tape then? And what's it got in its pocketses?
The REAL Cheese Monkey
2005-04-13 . chapter 1
Like your story, will read more of it later when I'm not so sleep-deprived.
Reinbeauchaser
2005-03-29 . chapter 10
Okay, I know I need to do some serious catching up, but - wow, relationships already?

*goes to check last review she gave - eeps - chapter 6! That was my last review?*

*Coughs* Well, considering how long it's been since I LAST reviewed,*coughs* and this is already chapter TEN, *coughs* guess having the guys and gals twitterpatting is okay.

*blushes*

Hey, Leo! Keep it clean, will ya? What's that you say? UG, yeah, I know, I shouldn't talk. I do plan on rewriting 'certain' chapters of 'certain' stories, so - yeah - I'll back off, now. Can't point a finger when there' three more pointing back at me, I guess.

*sighs...cheeky ninja*

Well, this was a nice chappy. As all the others have been (up to chapter six, since I'm WAY behind right now).

With that said, looks like you're back on track again. Hey, now that I think about it, you sort of took a bit of hiatus from writing, didn't ya? So, guess I can't blame myself for not keeping up with things. LOL

Just kidding. With three past chapters yet to read, it's obvious you must have updated, right? Unless you did so while Fan Fiction was having growing pains.

Anyway, loved this chapter.

Be blessed.
pacphys
2005-03-28 . chapter 10
Aw, Raph's making Don get up! hehe. Only to take the phone away anyhow. Hmm... Two words for you, Raph: Anger Management. *Raphael growls* Eek! *pacphys runs and hides in a cubby*

*pokes head out of cubby she hid from Raph in to answer, Leo* Yes, of course he was his usual charming self. What else would you expect from Raphy-boy? *crawls out of cubby and wanders off*

Is Faith hitting on Leo? *reads a little farther* Yes, that would be a definite yes.

Poor Raph, still doesn't have a girl! hehe.

Hehe, cute chapter!!

Hasta Luego,
~Pac
BubblyShell22
2005-03-28 . chapter 10
Yay! I was right about Faith saving Leo. Cool. Please update soon. This is getting very good.

The Bubbly One,
Shell
Sassyblondexoxo
2005-03-28 . chapter 10
Whew... so everyone's okay. LOL, loved the conversation between Leo and Raph on the phone...you have their "arguements" down to an art! And Faith and Leo getting it on...hm, a plot bunny for the green underground? *wink wink*

Nice job again! LOL, loved your comment about the buses - it's so true!
~SASSY
Sassyblondexoxo
2005-03-28 . chapter 9
Hey there! Two more chapters of Trouble! Good for you! Thank goodness there's another one...because I gotta know if Leo is okay! Looks like Faith is finally coming around...

On to the next!

~SASSY
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