 xxDoomCookiexx 5/24/09 . chapter 14I luved the story but didn't really like the ending. I don't kno why i just didn't. It was still really good tho! XD |
 Raven's Secret 5/9/07 . chapter 7this is an amazing plotline and very well written. good job! |
 Poison's Ivy 3/31/06 . chapter 13i like the ending sentence. it was pretty good.
awesome story. i love horror. and mystery, and romance, my fav. genres |
 stepheniealice 12/20/05 . chapter 14Had the alternate ending been the actual ending, I would've been upset there would be no sequel. But, I could safely enjoy it, because I knew there would be a sequel. I think the ending may have been a bit rushed on it, like casually walking up to someone and explaining to them that you were Slade. I don't think Robin would have so easily believed him, either, but I dunno. It was still great. I found this story while I was searching, and it was cute to start out with, and then I was scared by the end. Later, when I got this account, I went searching for it again, except I thought the cute Haunted House story and the Masquerade story were two seperate ones (it had been awhile...). And then I reread it again, and I was like, "Oh, yeah." Fell in love with it all over again. Amazing work. |
 jordochick12 10/8/05 . chapter 1nice |
 Tritium 7/12/05 . chapter 14kind of a silly crappy alternate ending.. but good story! but the concept of zombies who like music is kinda wierd.. lol |
 Tanyeera 4/10/05 . chapter 14 This is supposed to be an example of how you love us? And you actually preferred this ending to the other ending? Man, you are seriously sick dude. |
 Alotua 3/26/05 . chapter 14Damn! that was a hot fic fic! first it was all cute and funny and then it was all morbid and scary as hell . . . WTF! This fic rocks! but it makes about no sense .! I loved the alternate epilogue, teehee XD! and again, WTF! This fic scared the shit out of me! If I wasn't dead tired I'd be afraid to go to sleep . . . WTF! XD |
 Alotua 3/26/05 . chapter 2LMAO! This is great! JLA geting scared out of their asses by the Teen Titans! ROCK ON! YaY! SQUEE XD! YaY! I'm loving this fic so much! AWESOME! |
 bmwrider 2/25/05 . chapter 14 Concerning the Alternate Epilogue: Return to Home, hated it. Why bother? |
 kerricarri 12/18/04 . chapter 14wow, you're chapters have gotten ALOT better, smoother and longer over time and I like this the Masquarade curse thingy, very well put into the story plus the story has a complete change of mood after the haunted house part. but I did NOT like the alternate ending... it just ended up abruptly... and you're right, there's no way to make a sequal for with an ending like that -.-;
ah well... I did like the other ending, in that one Tim Drake is 'innocent' and all. |
 kerricarri 12/18/04 . chapter 1it's slightly lacking in detail, so it doesn't really have a smooth transition to the next line/day and whatnot-I do like the plot though... but I wish that you'd spend a bit more time on this chapter. it seems to move at a really fast pace, giving you the impression that you rushed on writing these chapters.
other than that, yay |
 Ishgone 12/10/04 . chapter 14-evil laugh- That was awesome! It was so morbid and dark and completely evil! xD I loved it. Especially the alternate epilogue. ; Great job! |
 sakuradancer3 11/17/04 . chapter 13ew. hate this ending, like the first one though |
 Fallen White Roses 10/26/04 . chapter 13Lovely alternate ending. -giggles nervously-
Lily |