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xxDoomCookiexx 5/24/09 . chapter 14
I luved the story but didn't really like the ending. I don't kno why i just didn't. It was still really good tho! XD
Raven's Secret 5/9/07 . chapter 7
this is an amazing plotline and very well written. good job!
Poison's Ivy 3/31/06 . chapter 13
i like the ending sentence. it was pretty good.

awesome story. i love horror. and mystery, and romance, my fav. genres
stepheniealice 12/20/05 . chapter 14
Had the alternate ending been the actual ending, I would've been upset there would be no sequel. But, I could safely enjoy it, because I knew there would be a sequel. I think the ending may have been a bit rushed on it, like casually walking up to someone and explaining to them that you were Slade. I don't think Robin would have so easily believed him, either, but I dunno. It was still great. I found this story while I was searching, and it was cute to start out with, and then I was scared by the end. Later, when I got this account, I went searching for it again, except I thought the cute Haunted House story and the Masquerade story were two seperate ones (it had been awhile...). And then I reread it again, and I was like, "Oh, yeah." Fell in love with it all over again. Amazing work.
jordochick12 10/8/05 . chapter 1
nice
Tritium 7/12/05 . chapter 14
kind of a silly crappy alternate ending.. but good story! but the concept of zombies who like music is kinda wierd.. lol
Tanyeera 4/10/05 . chapter 14
This is supposed to be an example of how you love us? And you actually preferred this ending to the other ending? Man, you are seriously sick dude.
Alotua 3/26/05 . chapter 14
Damn! that was a hot fic fic! first it was all cute and funny and then it was all morbid and scary as hell . . . WTF! This fic rocks! but it makes about no sense .! I loved the alternate epilogue, teehee XD! and again, WTF! This fic scared the shit out of me! If I wasn't dead tired I'd be afraid to go to sleep . . . WTF! XD
Alotua 3/26/05 . chapter 2
LMAO! This is great! JLA geting scared out of their asses by the Teen Titans! ROCK ON! YaY! SQUEE XD! YaY! I'm loving this fic so much! AWESOME!
bmwrider 2/25/05 . chapter 14
Concerning the Alternate Epilogue: Return to Home, hated it. Why bother?
kerricarri 12/18/04 . chapter 14
wow, you're chapters have gotten ALOT better, smoother and longer over time and I like this the Masquarade curse thingy, very well put into the story plus the story has a complete change of mood after the haunted house part. but I did NOT like the alternate ending... it just ended up abruptly... and you're right, there's no way to make a sequal for with an ending like that -.-;

ah well... I did like the other ending, in that one Tim Drake is 'innocent' and all.
kerricarri 12/18/04 . chapter 1
it's slightly lacking in detail, so it doesn't really have a smooth transition to the next line/day and whatnot-I do like the plot though... but I wish that you'd spend a bit more time on this chapter. it seems to move at a really fast pace, giving you the impression that you rushed on writing these chapters.

other than that, yay
Ishgone 12/10/04 . chapter 14
-evil laugh- That was awesome! It was so morbid and dark and completely evil! xD I loved it. Especially the alternate epilogue. ; Great job!
sakuradancer3 11/17/04 . chapter 13
ew. hate this ending, like the first one though
Fallen White Roses 10/26/04 . chapter 13
Lovely alternate ending. -giggles nervously-

Lily
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