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| crzygrl 2006-08-30 ch 3, | abusehey i think u should like add more chapters but if not u should make a sequal 2 this...it was good. |
| animechick 2005-08-24 ch 3, anon. | abusei like how you put your own twist on a very common story plot good job |
| Ashley 2005-08-02 ch 3, anon. | abuseaw that was so cute!! |
| Annie Lennox 2005-07-25 ch 3, anon. | abuseSister or not, if somebody cut my hair while I was sleeping, I'd have to effing shoot them. *cough* |
| Space-Case7029 2004-08-16 ch 3, | abuseGood story. On fitting an Elizabeth in, you could have had them expecting twins. LOL Enjoyed it. |
| WJShipper4eva 2004-08-16 ch 3, | abuseOh, great ending. Brooke is a good name, and Elizabeth is one of my favs. Kudos! |
| WJShipper4eva 2004-08-16 ch 1, | abuseOh, I luv that movie! Good idea for a story, although usually i lean more towards g/s, but I like your story. If you still need a beta, I would luv to! |
| Vengeful 2004-08-16 ch 3, | abusevery good story. i liked it. |
| love N/S 2004-08-16 ch 3, anon. | abuseI love happy ending 2~belong to Nick/Sara make it a lot better |
| Death's Integrity 2004-08-15 ch 1, | abuseOMG! i so totally want to read more! when are u going to upload the next chapter?! i'd love to see how this goes... :D keep up the good work! |
| Hannah 2004-07-28 ch 1, anon. | abusei fink dis is a good fanfic...but u should incorporate some of ur own ideas into it aswell...u might also like to go a little further wif da endin dan da movie does...apart from dat welldone |
| K 2004-07-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseKeep going this is cool |
| Alyx7 2004-07-23 ch 1, | abuseHey - love the fic, though it really should follow the movie The Parent Trap less, and be more original. I'd love to help beta, if you still haven't found one. |
| spikes-storm 2004-07-23 ch 1, | abuseHey. Love it so far. Cant wait to read the next chapter. I want to see how the girls handle it and what nick and sara do when they find out. CIAO |
| firestorm13 2004-07-23 ch 1, anon. | abusehm this is interesting, seen the parent trap, can't wait to see what happens next |