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crzygrl
2006-08-30
ch 3,
abusehey i think u should like add more chapters but if not u should make a sequal 2 this...it was good.
animechick
2005-08-24
ch 3, anon.
abusei like how you put your own twist on a very common story plot
good job
Ashley
2005-08-02
ch 3, anon.
abuseaw that was so cute!!
Annie Lennox
2005-07-25
ch 3, anon.
abuseSister or not, if somebody cut my hair while I was sleeping, I'd have to effing shoot them.

*cough*
Space-Case7029
2004-08-16
ch 3,
abuseGood story. On fitting an Elizabeth in, you could have had them expecting twins. LOL Enjoyed it.
WJShipper4eva
2004-08-16
ch 3,
abuseOh, great ending. Brooke is a good name, and Elizabeth is one of my favs. Kudos!
WJShipper4eva
2004-08-16
ch 1,
abuseOh, I luv that movie! Good idea for a story, although usually i lean more towards g/s, but I like your story. If you still need a beta, I would luv to!
Vengeful
2004-08-16
ch 3,
abusevery good story. i liked it.
love N/S
2004-08-16
ch 3, anon.
abuseI love happy ending 2~belong to Nick/Sara make it a lot better
Death's Integrity
2004-08-15
ch 1,
abuseOMG! i so totally want to read more! when are u going to upload the next chapter?! i'd love to see how this goes... :D keep up the good work!
Hannah
2004-07-28
ch 1, anon.
abusei fink dis is a good fanfic...but u should incorporate some of ur own ideas into it aswell...u might also like to go a little further wif da endin dan da movie does...apart from dat welldone
K
2004-07-24
ch 1, anon.
abuseKeep going this is cool
Alyx7
2004-07-23
ch 1,
abuseHey - love the fic, though it really should follow the movie The Parent Trap less, and be more original.

I'd love to help beta, if you still haven't found one.
spikes-storm
2004-07-23
ch 1,
abuseHey. Love it so far. Cant wait to read the next chapter. I want to see how the girls handle it and what nick and sara do when they find out. CIAO
firestorm13
2004-07-23
ch 1, anon.
abusehm this is interesting, seen the parent trap, can't wait to see what happens next
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