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Miravisu
2008-12-17 . chapter 18
It's been a while since this was last updated, but do I hope there'll be more. As it's quite the curious crossover!
Nemesis La Algol
2008-01-30 . chapter 18
A sympathic alternative story indeed :)

But NADIA was written by Hideaki Anno ;)
The Mad shoe1
2007-01-22 . chapter 18
This was a truley original crossover fic, and you did a good job writing it, i do hope you plan to finish it someday.
aslhfkal
2006-03-08 . chapter 1
:)
JPElles
2006-01-06 . chapter 18
Good story. Could use a bit more focus on batman and wonderwomans skills(lasso maybe). Of course I can't get enough of that kind of stuff so my opinion might be slanted. One thing i've noticed is the complete absence of the sexual/romantic tention between BM/WW thats ever present in the JL comics and animated series as well. Do you really hate that pairing or what, because it at least deserves a mention at some point and you're already 18 chapters in.

Of not possibly is the focus in the comics of batmans relationship with children. Theres been quite a few where a kid is killed, or their parents, sometimes even just wounded and in critical and he goes berserk. Tightens his grip on the gangs/mob and petty and big criminals and super villians until they help him(desperatly) find or sometimes kill the perpetrator themselves.

Batman would stop everything for a couple things. Leslie who helped raise him(and who's personality he copies is what I gathered from death of the maidens Graphic Novel) And helping kids. Even if it meant the world going to hell. He pretty much told Plastic Mans kid that as well in that one JL comic.Sorry for bothering you so much. Keep writing.
Winged Knight
2005-12-13 . chapter 18
Well, it's good to see that their differences have been resolved somewhat. Pain clouds judgement, but it takes a truly strong person to see through it. I'm happy that they did. Keep writing the good ones!
Fusion Blaster
2005-12-13 . chapter 18
Well that was a fascinating update. Batman taking Jean a bit under his wing huh. Very interesting indeed. I can see him giveing the boy a few lessons in all sorts of things.

I just wonder if he's inadvertantly inspired the boy to a similar path as he.
Winged Knight
2005-10-12 . chapter 17
One again, a great chapter. I noticed some minor spelling mistakes though. They don't interfere with the story though. Keep writing the good ones!
Winged Knight
2005-09-09 . chapter 16
Depressing, and I can understand how the kids can be angry, but I hope that they can understand later that killing hundreds to save three defeats the point. Keep writing the good ones!
DianaRulz
2005-09-05 . chapter 16
aww, so sad. I hope the crew can be saved!
X-Over
2005-09-05 . chapter 16
Liked readingt his latest chapter of yours. I'm glad thgat you're back to writing this crossover story of yours. Please keep up the good work. Thank you. :)
X-Over
2005-07-02 . chapter 15
LIked reading this new chapter of yours. Looking for forward to reading the next one. Sorry for not reviewing earlier ... still have some Internet connection problems. Sorry. Anyway, please keep up the good work. Thank you. :)
DreamsFire
2005-06-28 . chapter 7
I am really starting to enjoy your series now since the plot is really kicking up. Once again your plot development is very smooth and connected.
DreamsFire
2005-06-28 . chapter 6
I was wondering when you would get Diana to wake up, but i knew that you would make just the right timing. and you did. I really enoy reading your fic so far, it seems well thought out..which i enjoy.
DreamsFire
2005-06-28 . chapter 5
that was another good chapter. Please send me a link to your fanart, i would like to see it.Thanks
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