Nice!

Pretty darn nice! Personally i always thought medabots should stay childish but thats just me! Ignore that...

For once i can't think of constructive criticism... Man this is not like me...

Oo! Heres one, you didn't reall describe Sir Lanceabot and his medafighter's looks but i guess it's a little late for that. Great job.

Become the very best!

This is rather nice to read.

Um... I think Arika will do it, I mean losing all her dreams of becoming a reporter just x this?

What about Henry taking her to the clinic? Or at least add a Henry part, the poor guy didn't appeared much in this fic.

Keep on writing

Oh, crap, I saw it coming... let's see what happens

Uh oh... trouble ahead...

NIce chap!

A unique twist in the story. I'm interested in how you go from here. GL on the next chapter

O_o Poor Erica...

if arika is pregnant,when did she have sex?

your story is very instering, well I hope you can write more because i need to know what is going to happen next, so please update soon:)

Didn't realize you'd take it so seriously... well, if I offended you with my comments about Koji, you have my apologies. Personally, I didn't exactly really feel for him until the Kenya v. Japan match in the WRC. I suppose I was just a little surprised Sumilidon was defeated that quickly (well, it seemed fast to me), considering he's No. 2.

As for my opinion on those two episodes, on 19, I was too busy laughing at Rintaro to really pay attention that duo, and in 20, I was laughing at Space Medafighter X.

In any case, I'm beyond that and moving on.

For this chapter, I find it a convincing portrayal of the emotional roller-coaster that must be going through the mind of a pregnant teen girl. Much deeper than the average author out there who simply throws sex into a story without even bothering to analyze the consequences of it.

...

You're scaring me here.

Koji bashing, Koji bashing, there it goes, all the way... *ends sing-song voice*

A word of warning: Judging from mad-man's comments: If you're really going to post the lemon, better not do it here. There are other fanfiction sites out there like mediaminer, fandomination, and efanfiction.

Uh... disregard the last one, it shut down. Darn.

the lord lives!

may the sky rain with happyness!

i didnt know you did fanfics other than lemions.

later the MAD-MAN (MAD-DUDE at DHZ)

Intriguing... perhaps this little gem will help revive the near-dead Medabots section of ff.net.

I'm liking this. Really am. "Vulgar Medabot," oh yeah. Sex parts in Medabots, huh? *Cryptic grin*

Just for clarification, I was almost certain that Metabee would end up with Honey-Force in Medarot Damashii. Eh. Whatever.

And, you are 150% percent on Disney being an evil empire. They were pretty cool 10 years ago, but they've really gone downhill now. (Except for The Alamo. Awesome movie.)