Cool story! I actually like Hojo, despite his evilness to Sephy-kins. You portrayed all the characters very accurately and I like you're description of the younger Sephy-kins. Great job!

that was very cute.

~Sabith

*cries* it's so sad :( heart-breaking. you really did a great job giving Hojo something reminiscent of a soul, as much as i might wish he didn't have one. you really have a talent for fleshing out these charas in vivid and realistic ways. so you should continue writing fanfiction :)

*claps* YAY! I loved this. Nice little plot bunny you exorcised here. I approve. Not that it matters or anything. But I do like. Okay. I go now.

No, it wasn't confusing; it was fantastic, actually. I love reading stories about little Seph :) And it's an interesting explanation for his apparent coldness in the game. Good work!

excellent story, Seph still is the best villain though, despite the past troubles. (^_^)

Sephy isn't a Cetra...
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Just kidding. I liked it alot. ^.^

Very nicely done. A few typos here or there, but nothing I wouldn't do, I'm sure. ^^

I've always wondered too what really made Sephiroth so cold. Now that great question is answered.

But, the poor dear. ;_; He's like, what, six and already thinking such pessimistic thoughts?

You really need to somehow make amends with Sephiroth so he doesn't hate you so much, Jen. Maybe giving him Cloud-service[fan-service, but with Cloud] could be an olive branch, of sorts?