Really well written, and makes sense, too.

excellent i manegage a h/c/angst archive and posted this i love stories that humanize vodemort and am writing one myself i hate the whole pure evil thing ya know hey does anyone know any good angst forum thanks

This is exceptional. I know it's been a long time since it was posted, but I just found it for the first time. I love how you utilize the same phrase in Tom's two worlds. And I love how you have Voldemort's weakness in his own belief that he will lose. And of course how his time with Harry is almost like his time with Kay. Beautiful.

Very interesting and well written.

i think you wrote Voldemort rather well..
you've portrayed him as a real person, who has just become so disillusioned with the world that he is trying to change it all... you haven't written him as an 'evil' person, more as a person with realli emothions and feelings, even if they are quite buried..
i think Voldemort in your other story will come out rather well...
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Excellent story. I liked how the repetition was separated (how so you spell that?) by a few paragraphs, but also ended the story, so you got that history-repeating-itself impression there at the end.