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| fido02 2007-03-29 ch 1, | abuseexcellent i manegage a h/c/angst archive and posted this i love stories that humanize vodemort and am writing one myself i hate the whole pure evil thing ya know hey does anyone know any good angst forum thanks |
| Melted-icicle 2005-04-28 ch 1, | abuseThis is exceptional. I know it's been a long time since it was posted, but I just found it for the first time. I love how you utilize the same phrase in Tom's two worlds. And I love how you have Voldemort's weakness in his own belief that he will lose. And of course how his time with Harry is almost like his time with Kay. Beautiful. |
| Moon Archer 2004-08-11 ch 1, | abuseVery interesting and well written. |
| Ruth01 2004-07-26 ch 1, | abusei think you wrote Voldemort rather well.. you've portrayed him as a real person, who has just become so disillusioned with the world that he is trying to change it all... you haven't written him as an 'evil' person, more as a person with realli emothions and feelings, even if they are quite buried.. i think Voldemort in your other story will come out rather well... X |
| Phinea 2004-07-24 ch 1, | abuseExcellent story. I liked how the repetition was separated (how so you spell that?) by a few paragraphs, but also ended the story, so you got that history-repeating-itself impression there at the end. |