Well now I can add one more to the list of pairings I wouldn't have considered in a million years that turned out to be fantastic with a good writer.

Really great job.

wow, that was amazing...and I don't like Dawn and Riley. But that was a totally one of a kind story--thanks

Oh God. That was so sad. Which means you did your job.

I don't care for that at all. This isn't an assault on your abilities as a writer or anything- even the fic was good- you just pushed the sad buttons that you wanted to and it made me unhappy. Good job. No cookie.

Well-plotted and well-written. A believable and endearing romance with a reasonable yet beautiful twist. You get us invested in the story, then use that investment t good dramatic ends. You're not afraid to take risks, writing more than merely wish-fulfillment. Excellent work.

This fic is nominated @ Fractured Fairytales Awards.

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Silent Screams
Tin Soldier

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OMG! This was so sad! I totally loved it and it made me cry and now I'm angry and upset and thank you so much for writing this even though now I feel like cradling Riley in my arms or at least bring him back his sweet Dawn...

Wow that was good. i really enjoyed the entire story. i liked how he found her. by chance? or did she always need protecting? very nice imagery with the dried blood and constant need for the 'am i real' is just how i would imagine if i were a made person like that. Keep up the good work.

Awesome story.

Im a little confused was Dawn there or not? But other than that it was good.