   iluvinuyashayyuyu 9/5/04 . chapter 1i love it! you should make the yu yu crew go 2 hearshey park! |
| The Walking Dictionary 8/16/04 . chapter 1 VERY FUNNY! i have never been to Splish Splash...but i have been to a park that had rides that sound alot a like (darien lake), anyways that was very funny! |
| andromedacblack 7/28/04 . chapter 1 WOO HOO! I wish I could go to Slish Splash but I can't swim -.-* My parents never had me or my older sister taught to, so we're two floundering idiots! Sigh... |
| Dreamchasereternity 7/23/04 . chapter 1 XD that was funny! I have once again frightened my rabbit away by spontaneously bursting out laughing. Darn...Anyway, nice story! Oh yeah...before I shut up...
Hiei and Flash, sitting in a tree!
K-I-S-S-I-N-G!
*decides not to finish and instead runs for her life* |
| Angel435 7/23/04 . chapter 1 That was cool. Very funny, and interesting. I still cant picture Hiei at a water park, but it was still cool. Too bad it was a one-shot fic, but those are always just as good as the ones that have like 30 chapters _ Keep up the good work _ Angel435 |
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