This is such a good story

even if it is youre first,

this seems like it would be very interesting,

ive never heard of someone blooding Truska!

Sounds cool :)

If you like Humour, I would ask the favour of having you check out my new story When A Tales Come A Knockin which sort of pokes fun sues. with characters like Eragon, Pendragon, Darren Shan & Characters from my stories :)

Lemme know. ;)

Thanks!

& Shayy ;

Continue please, it is very good!

**scowls** I'd rather not have to login to review. **hinthint** But I must VOICE MY OPPINION!

I had troubles reading it because it was in ONE HUGE paragraph (or close enough) so if you put spaces between the paragraphs and the talking-line things that would greatly be appreciated. More people will review it and the lazy ones **coughsometimesmecough** will read it. Write more! And FIX IT! Pllease!

Interesting start and very nice. though i think you should have first sent the prologue then the first chapter instead of sending both at the same time. Considerig it is your first fic you deserve a congratulation. hope to read more.