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| Charmed Ravenclaw 2006-01-01 ch 1, | abuseYeah, Evan never really fit into his other lives did he? Good reflection on the consequences. |
| avalon 2005-10-26 ch 1, anon. | abuseHey, i just stumbled onto this. I am a big fan of the movie butterfly effect, and i love the concepts that were worked into it. You did a GREAT job grasping it in a nutshell. i LOVE how you explain about how he has kind of lived for so long, even though he is supposed to be 20. The movie only touched base on that for a short scene, but you took it and turned it into something really powerful. I love it! |
| TwistedZed 2005-08-12 ch 1, | abuseWow, this is really deep. I like it. XD |
| BlushingFlames 2004-11-04 ch 1, | abuseSurprisingly this is the first review that I am posting, I really enjoyed how you wrote the thoughts of Evan down. It shows such remourse which most don't write down...but it would have been interesting to see more.:) |
| brooklynbridge 2004-10-10 ch 1, | abuseIt was so much in such little wording. Amazing. Write some more! >>BrOoKe |
| Kei-Kugodgy 2004-10-07 ch 1, | abuseWell, this fic is really good. (sorry, my english write is not good ^^U). I saw that movie last week (or tow weeks ago) and is really awsome. U_U my english is bad...(sigh!) Well...this is a great oneshoot. (Go to my fics ^_^) Kei |
| WithTeeth 2004-09-20 ch 1, | abuseWow, I really like it, short but very very cool! I never really thought about the amount of deaths Evan caused, jeez! |
| McKay 2004-09-12 ch 1, | abuseNice job. It's hard to compress so much into 100 words. |
| dave 2004-09-03 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis is awsome stuff man keep it up.Oh yeah,10 of 10.But I gotta tell ya only one of a different fan fic was 9 of 10.No offence dude,no offence. |
| Gwenny the Penny v.2.0 2004-08-02 ch 1, | abuse:) This is short and poignant and I like it. |
| die Pretty 2004-07-29 ch 1, | abuseAwsome...I liked this. Did you calculate the amount of time he lived? Lol, that's definet reseach! I was suprized to see there was only five stories (I just posted one, so that makes six), considering how good of a movie it was- though I dis-liked the ending. I would have stppoed in the realitly where he didn't have arms- what would happen if he hadn't figued out a better reality? In that one, at least almost everyone was happy. The ending reality was probably the best though, considering EVERYONE was happy. okay, I'm babbling. I'll stop now. TMND |
| Stephanie Tucker 2004-07-25 ch 1, | abusecool cool |
| US Rock Star 2004-07-24 ch 1, | abuseWow, that was great. I like the ending it was good. Because alot of time people are always like, what would have happened If I had or hadnt done this or whatever. Kepp the Fics coming... :) Usrockstar, Amber |