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Princess Aranel
2004-09-15 . chapter 9
AW! That was the cutest thing I've ever read. I really loved it. And personally, I'm gad that Lizzie wasn't included that often in your fanfic. Double Bonus! But seriously, good job. I give you mad props. lol.
Hermione-Granger17
2004-08-27 . chapter 9
oh my gosh, made me cry!
absolutely loved this story, didnt go into too much detail where it wasn't needed. if you get me. and was sweet and meaningful and generally lovely in the right places.
Black Knight 03
2004-08-26 . chapter 9
You finished a story! Now if we can only get you to finish your other stories, lol. I'd suggest a sequel but...Okay, I'm done.

This was good, I had fun reading it. I liked how you wrote Miranda and Gordo being close even without Lizzie. Kidding aside, I'd really like to see you write something else, even another one shot. I like reading your stuff, your a good writer.
Elementals
2004-08-26 . chapter 9
I'm a big fan of Lizzie/Gordo type stories but lately have been a bigger fan of the Miranda/Gordo stories as they seem to have a certain quality that the regular ones don't have.

And this stories definitely has the quality that I like. Excellent. I hope you add more to this.
the gifted one
2004-08-22 . chapter 8
okay i love the chapter.sorry i haven't reviewed earlier but my computer just sucks. um that was a little unexpected at the end but i like anyway. who did miranda have sex with before gordo. holla back.
Black Knight 03
2004-08-22 . chapter 8
This story is good, you handled the ending of this chapter very well. I like how your having Gordo a little resistant to Ted and Miranda being the rational one. Keep going, lookin foward to the next chapter.
Some.Random.Person.Here
2004-08-22 . chapter 8
Oh wow..*scratches head* I sure wasn't expecting THAT! lol, it was good though, a little rushed, very good nonetheless. Miranda and Gordo are awesome together, frankly I'm gettin' tired of L/G, M/G is what I LOVE to read now. I even wrote my own M/G. I might do more. Keep up the great work!
Hermione-Granger17
2004-08-22 . chapter 8
It all happened so quickly, but was real sweet. Wasn't sickly at all! Loving this! Can't wait for more!
brie
2004-08-22 . chapter 8
I didn't look at the chapter title so the ending took me a little bit by suprise. Those crazy kids move fast. I'm not sure how you're going to end this one so I'll have to wait and see. Nice job.
SmilingPasta
2004-08-22 . chapter 8
woah that was unxepeacted i thought they were just going to kiss lol. anyways this chapter was good i related to Gordo somehow cuz i got a stepfather and i dont like him. please update soon and fast.

-Janet
Hermione-Granger17
2004-08-19 . chapter 7
eek so cute, absolutely loving it
keep going! x
jv2002
2004-08-17 . chapter 1
Great story. Write more soon!
Black Knight 03
2004-08-17 . chapter 7
It was a pretty good chapter. The Kate thing was nice, is she gonna pop up again? I like how your showing Miranda and Gordo's friendship and how close they are. Keep going, can't wait for the next chapter.
Hermione-Granger17
2004-08-12 . chapter 6
i love this so much, its so sweet. cant wait for the MG stuff, which im hoping is going to happen!
Black Knight 03
2004-08-11 . chapter 6
I think you did a good job with Gordo's reaction to the news, I could really see that happening, especially cause they've only been daiting for four months. This is really turning into a good story and I like how your handling Miranda and Gordo's relationship. IMO, they are close friends even without Lizzie. Keep going, lookin foward to the next chapter.
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