Holy CRAP i love your style of writing more than any other thing on this earth you are the best writer in the world! I read the description and was like KakaYondaime?!?!?!!?! But now i'm typing on the comp crying cuz that was awesome! So don't stop with wierd pairings you can convince people they are the meaning of naruto and life and update attraction cuz i'm addicted :)

Wow. This made me feel what Kakashi was feeling. This is amazing.

Truly wonderful. Excellently written and very well done.

That was simply stunning. The flow, the rythm and the emotions. Gyah the emotions! Certainly not fluffly, but beautiful in its own way. I loved the use of "you" instead of "I". I was shivering near the end...
*sigh* Too bad its finished.
Jaa!
Katanri

Been recommended to read this by another author and all I can say is...WOW It's brilliant, so provocative and angst galore, This side to Kakashi is a new one for me but definitley not a lesser one. Your writing style is truly to die for and it felt so real, almost like you'd experienced this yourself. Memorable, definitly memorable.

OMG thi sis one of the best Naruto fanfics I've read in a long time! I love how you managed to describe all of kakashi's jumbled thoughts. Really a job well done, but please don't let it end here!

God in Hell, that was the best story I have ever read. Bar none, hands down. This was amazing. I loved Kakashi and his impulsive needs/wants, and I LOVED Yondaime.

guh...I am goo now.

This was great, really great.

~Ivae

O-M-G!
I'm in awe.
This was awesome.
Even though I generally prefer stories were the people get together in theend this one was...just wow. I liked the concept and I liked the way it is written as well. It seemed so...

Aww! T_T That was ... sad, and strangely ... wow. ... unusual pairing, but wow. You managed to pull it off, and it was excellent! I love the detail. It was a bit dark, like you said, but you managed to weave in some happiness there :P

Excellent story, I look forward to reading your other stories :)

wow! dear lord was this good!

You got inside my head and nearly read my mind.

I got mad when you put my feelings on the screen.

And explained them with live references and deeper emotion than I ever could.

Even if someone that knew me finally understood what was going on inside my mind.

I could never do something like this. I feel worthless. You knocked me down to the level I should be on.

Thank you for breaking my ego.

I love this story.

Holy **-fantastic! This fic is amazing. I can't beleive it has so few reviews. Your run-on sentences give the feeling of being inside his head. Jesus Christ on a cracker. You are my new god of Yondaime X Kakashi.

URG! This was published so long ago. That means you’re never going to update! Because technically you never said it was a oneshot so you could update if you wanted to. What do I have to do to get you to keep going with this one? Tell me and I'll do it!

Your Nushi

This has to be the singularly most fantastic fanfics I've read in a long time. Not so much because of the story I think almost everyone could put themselves hypothetically into poor Kakashi's shoes in some sense or another, but because I was utterly breathless the WHOLE TIME I WAS READING.
You're the master of run-on sentences, but it left the point of view accurately scattered and hurried and a little hazy here and there. Beautifully written, and so real, I got sucked right into it (lucky me I got a kiss from Yondaime tonight... :) )and I'll be damned if I didn't feel the rain on my shoulders.
On a less professional sounding (which I'm not, I'm just stoked) note...well shucks, I guess he sort of caved in a little at the end, anyway, didn't he? :) (hugs Kakashi) Lucky little bastard... ;)

Hi. You have some nice writing here. I like the way you wrote this. It adds a new dimension to the fic. Something real, something that makes you actually live,feel the story. Nice job.

damn, that was good, i think you've just introduced me to a new fandom XD