One of the best stories involving Kakashi that I've ever read. It's very emotional, but not in a formulaic way. Very raw, honest, brutally beautiful. I'm now hooked on YonKaka, but this one will always be my favorite. 3

I love finding amazing reads 3

...I didn't review this before?

I read this agges ago and accidentally stumbled on it again just now and ... omfg. I got sucked straight in again. I remember this story so vividly, and it was just as powerful if not more so the second time round. By about halfway through I couldn't tear my damn eyes from the screen and then by the ending i was crying and had to stop and wipe my eyes so that i could continue. i also read it aloud (until people came in ;) and your run-on sentences were - while they were difficult to say in one setence - i did it! it's perfect, beautiful. the 'you' is so so effective. especially paired with the present tense, i am stunned. again lol.

Holy CRAP i love your style of writing more than any other thing on this earth you are the best writer in the world! I read the description and was like KakaYondaime? But now i'm typing on the comp crying cuz that was awesome! So don't stop with wierd pairings you can convince people they are the meaning of naruto and life and update attraction cuz i'm addicted :)

Wow. This made me feel what Kakashi was feeling. This is amazing.

Truly wonderful. Excellently written and very well done.

That was simply stunning. The flow, the rythm and the emotions. Gyah the emotions! Certainly not fluffly, but beautiful in its own way. I loved the use of "you" instead of "I". I was shivering near the end...

*sigh* Too bad its finished.

Jaa!

Katanri

Been recommended to read this by another author and all I can say is...WOW It's brilliant, so provocative and angst galore, This side to Kakashi is a new one for me but definitley not a lesser one. Your writing style is truly to die for and it felt so real, almost like you'd experienced this yourself. Memorable, definitly memorable.

OMG thi sis one of the best Naruto fanfics I've read in a long time! I love how you managed to describe all of kakashi's jumbled thoughts. Really a job well done, but please don't let it end here!

God in Hell, that was the best story I have ever read. Bar none, hands down. This was amazing. I loved Kakashi and his impulsive needs/wants, and I LOVED Yondaime.

guh...I am goo now.

This was great, really great.

Ivae

O-M-G!

I'm in awe.

This was awesome.

Even though I generally prefer stories were the people get together in theend this one was...just wow. I liked the concept and I liked the way it is written as well. It seemed so...

Aww! T_T That was ... sad, and strangely ... wow. ... unusual pairing, but wow. You managed to pull it off, and it was excellent! I love the detail. It was a bit dark, like you said, but you managed to weave in some happiness there :P

Excellent story, I look forward to reading your other stories :)

wow! dear lord was this good!

You got inside my head and nearly read my mind.

I got mad when you put my feelings on the screen.

And explained them with live references and deeper emotion than I ever could.

Even if someone that knew me finally understood what was going on inside my mind.

I could never do something like this. I feel worthless. You knocked me down to the level I should be on.

Thank you for breaking my ego.

I love this story.

Holy fucking-fantastic! This fic is amazing. I can't beleive it has so few reviews. Your run-on sentences give the feeling of being inside his head. Jesus Christ on a cracker. You are my new god of Yondaime X Kakashi.

URG! This was published so long ago. That means you’re never going to update! Because technically you never said it was a oneshot so you could update if you wanted to. What do I have to do to get you to keep going with this one? Tell me and I'll do it!

Your Nushi