Wow, that was an awesome story! The story of the robbers that is..I know the story of Christ is true. Well done! I really enjoyed reading this, thank you for writing it! I know it was a long time ago..it was still amazing!

Wow, I liked that. A lot. Quite a lot. SEEYA!

Great story!

Interesting insight... I'm surprised at how well you did. I'm a little baffled, I've never really thought about the "good" thief's story as being all that emotional and traumatic. Still, you did an amazing job... and accurate too. I can't pretend I know what pain he felt as he died, the outrage he felt as he saw Jesus die... but almost. It was pretty realistic... the setting, the sound... Maybe not what I had pictured, or ever imagined, but yeah, good job!

great story!

Artfully done. I like how you used the Bible references with this, a lot of Frank Perretti influences in this one.

A good story. According to Catholic tradition, the name of the Good Thief was Dismas. The other one was Gestas.

Moving. beautiful beyond words. I can't believe I put off reading your Biblical fics for so long. They're wonderful and it's not often that I find anime fanfiction mingling with such wonderful takes on the Bible for lack of better words. You have a lot of talent, don't let anyone else say otherwise. I believe your talent comes straight from God and it's great to see someone thank God in such a way as this.

Wow, that was so good! I never thought of the two theives ever having known each other before, but that was an interesting thought. Keep writing!

God bless,

spunkie-girl

This is really a lovely story. And it's the first thing I've read about Jesus that didn't try to convert me (I gave up Christianity when I realized what asses so many Christians were making themselves, and it was just too shameful to belong to the same religious group as them though I still believe in God and Jesus and that) back. It's really beautiful.

Here is a story I would be proud to call my own. Beautiful. :) Watch out for me - I should be writing Jeremiah's story soon enough. :D

Wow...that was...that was amazing! I loved it so much! Very inspirational. Great job!

Oh...very nice! Good job.

Ohhhh... beautiful. It's so sad. You are a truly great writer. I love it!

::calmly proceeds to go into total shock, and ignores the tears streaming down her face:: Oh. My. Gosh. That was beautiful. Wonderful. I am sending the link to this to all my Christian friends. And, hey, the atheists wouldn't be that damaged by reading it too...