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Draculina17
2008-07-08
ch 18,
abuseI really love this story and only have one real peeve. Why do you keep calling the mangenkyo sharingan mange, that's an animal skin desease.
LuneCramoisie
2008-07-07
ch 12,
abuseThe Iruka and Naruto reunion actually made me tear up a bit. TT_TT Iruka's always been so good to Naruto, and it always made my heart do a little happy dance whenever Naruto's face lit up as Iruka-sensei entered the room. Very well done. It could have been horribly sappy and required insulin, but yours were obviously the right hands to take it away with.
Vixkill
2008-06-28
ch 30,
abusehaha, when sasuke was all like 'what?' i was like 'what?!' noticing i'd gotten to the latest chapter. man, your fic is huge.

I can't say i like your kakashi, but he is believable and Gai is more awesome than others give him credit for. which is so cool.
a pity sakura isn't a medical ninja here, she still seems weak (not that where i'm up to in shippuden has acknowledged anything about her new strength since sasori yet).

anyway, you're writing a really great and entertaining story here, keep it up.
Ninja Master
2008-06-25
ch 5,
abuseGreat up the great work!
......
2008-06-15
ch 17, anon.
abusedeidara is a dude...
BloodySeraphim
2008-05-02
ch 2,
abuseWow. That was believably funny. That semi-serious humor killed me. I don't know why it was so funny, but it just was. Especially the small intestine part.
Seriously Yours
2008-05-02
ch 11,
abuseThis story is amazing. Off to read moar :P
Alarose
2008-03-23
ch 30,
abusewow. really good story! keep it up!
MULAN-IFUWEREGAY
2008-03-19
ch 1,
abuseupdate soon
anko2468
2008-03-14
ch 13,
abuseanko:...-_-'

sinslayer:0_o...

shikafan:0_0...

all 3:w...t...f...chocalates on sale for 100% off.GIMME SOME!
MrEmperor
2008-03-11
ch 3,
abuseInteresting. Looks amusing.
the panda
2008-03-07
ch 7,
abuseWhy's everybody gay? I can understand Kabuto and Orochimaru, BUT Iruka?! The guy doesn't come off as gay in any way and Kakashi reads Jiraiya's ** (Which has to be exclusively heterosexual judging from the sannin). Kakashi and Gai are even more of a stretch (even though Gai is straight in this fic). This is turning awkward.
Herooftimes
2008-03-03
ch 30,
abusei wish the next chapter was up now. seems like orochimaur took a little pity on sasuke
Herooftimes
2008-03-03
ch 29,
abusewil we ever learn the mechanics of shadow walking? uh oh...why does this only have 30 chapters right now...did gaara tell his therapist why he destroyed the sand?
Herooftimes
2008-03-01
ch 27,
abuseawesome prank for naruto, i liekd that it was explained. just how large are narutos reserves when compaered to kisames? because kisames were said to be quite large. it seems hatake sakumo would have lasted in the akatsuki...
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