I loved how you wrote this suicide. It's beautiful. And sad. But I love Dawn and her destructive self. You did such a good job describing it.

angsty... and i should still not be allowed to review )

Awwww! that was TOO sad! awwww! but well written.

I think you need some help. Go see a shrink please befor its to late

I got chills. Written in first person and very well written.

Well written, and catching. This really lets you sympathize with Dawn, so sad. Well done!

i don't like you. you can't kill dawn! she rox! so go away and crawl in a hole or something. mean, evil person.

whoa! that was deep!

I loved this story. Its great!

Very well written, disturbingly real.

omg, you have a gift. the way you described dawn's parting with the world was so soft and gentle, happy that she was leaving. it was a moving piece. please write more, write about Dawn in heaven. that'll be sweet . . .

that was excellent

In only a few short passages you left a lasting picture in my mind. It was a very powerful read :)

damn...that's powerful...Alan, the Mad Dragon