. . .

I don't think I can continue reading this story...

It has mutated from something simple and fun... into ... "this."

But yeah...

I guess this is my limit... 3 or more days straight...and I finally succumbed.

But I might as well give you my input...

This fic is more dead that infamous Naruto story: PefectLionheart's "Chunin Exam Day."

This fic is like watching a perfect, cute puppy...whose suddenly was force-fed the Bible, the dictionary, Tom Cruise, Harry Potter, and a tank...then steamrolled into one.

This fic...is like forcing a flabby Richard Simmons to do jumping jacks (and be televised on prime-time) until he was 180 years old.

Overall... This fic is horribly unbalanced.

And I was a sucker for reading this much of it.

You do have talent, and I love LONG fics...BUT (in my pov) this fic has become long and ridiculous!

It's like...this story lost its spark. That amazing/exciting essence that kept me wanting and jumping for more.

All I can say is:
"Thank you for the ride." -bows- "But I think I'm gonna barf."

But congrats to me! I now know that I've read this fic years ago...and I've never gotten this far!! I must have blanked it out from my memory.

-Hooray!-

And before I forget!

-Merry Christmas!- -Happy Holidays!- And a wonderful New Year!

Fare thee well.

...

o.o

oh f*.

Moral of the story: Self inserts are bad? ):

Becuz the world will implode!


lol.

A really...umm..original story...for sure. ^^

o_o at least the chapter is becoming... readable. :)

so much dialogue... >>;

Enjoyed the Nabiki scene...and the dead smooshed up vampires.

Fun-ish. :)

This was a pain to read. T_T

I know almost squat about these other animes and games. D:

Sheesh...half of the time I was just rollin my eyes waiting for Ukyo/Aaron to pop up! Sheesh. You'd think the main character of this fic (the first one introduced) would be the focus. =_=

Ugh -shivers-

I liked the last half of this chapter...

Everything else was just a mess. Too many in-jokes or in-references. This fic is so messy. And please, don't past that off as a "style."

Plain and simple...this fic is as cohesive as Chris' decaying body dancing with a certain Hawaiian principle.

Exactly. x_x

o_o

wow...it only took me 11 chapters till my brain has begun to hurt. T_T

So complicated. GAH!

-falls over-

woah...book one?

Sheesh! This story is long! But still very fun! ;3

I love angsty Ukyo and her questioning of her existence!

P.S.- You are a great writer! I love this story. :3

I seriously love the angst and mental turmoil! It's beautiful. T.T

I sometimes wonder who could throw the biggest Shi Shi Hokudan...

Ryoga or Ukyo 2.0

lol!

XD

Wonderful story!

Everything about this story is perfect.

I would have reviewed every chapter, but I couldn't stop...I had to read more! ;D

So f-ing fantastic!!

P.S.- I love the summary recaps you put on every chappy intro! They are funny. :)

Fantastic!

I especially liked Ranma's intro! I was rolling. :3

Wonderful chapter!

What a fun story! :D

This is good ...

o.o

shockingly great!

I never would have guessed that Aaron and Ukyo were stuck together.

;D

Wonderful surprise at the end! Good thing I read slow. o.o

I think the lack of reviews you get on this site can be directly attributed to the formatting whammy that this site has done to your work. Because, really, this fanfic is definitely one of the most fantastic, epic, and overall amazing pieces of completed work I have ever read. I'm only saddened that people have decided to skip over it because it is a self insert and it isn't formatted correctly on this site (had to read all chapters on your site and I knew that only because I had decided to read your profile before giving up). Thank you for the enjoyable read and I hope that your next work is as great as this was.

Whoa. This is a truly epic story. It's taken forever to read but I gottqa say, you guys did an excellent job! I will definately be on the lookout for more of your work.

Wow. This is big, long, extensive, and extremely well thought out. Amazing. Still, all this and no 'My December?' Oh well. Still a good ensemble