Reviews for Alternate Universe

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Laura-Shi 2007-09-27 ch 7,	abuseGood story so far I cannot wait to see what happens next.
Niki-Uni 2006-10-17 ch 7,	abusewonder what happens next...hope you update soon! It's an excellent story!! ciao for now!
Marieko 2006-03-04 ch 6,	abuseAW Its so friggin sad!! there better be at least a bit of happy happy joy joy in this fic, even if its just a smidge
Marieko 2006-03-04 ch 2,	abuseOh my goodness. I can tell this will be a good fic (grins)
mysticneko 2005-07-07 ch 7,	abusewtf? Chapter 6 gets cut off! I'm not reading chapter 7 til its fixed cause I think it would ruin the story and plot line.
mysticneko 2005-07-07 ch 5,	abusePretty good. In chapter 3 I got kinda confused cause I didn't realize that you were switching POV's. But then I figured it out from the different manners of speaking and who they were talking to. There was only one thing I saw wrong, you put prolly instead of probably.
Raining Petals 2005-06-21 ch 7,	abuseYAY! ^_^ You've been making me very happy! Updating all of your YusukexKurama fics! Thank you!! (although I know it wasn't specifically for me...but I'm as happy as if it was because I know you personally prefer your HieixYusuke fics) Thanks so much for updating. Now, I was a little confused in the beginning since it seemed like I skipped a chapter; going from Yusuke and Kurama chatting to the middle of a fight. But then, I often get confused in fight scenes so it might just be me...anyway, now that Hiei's not in love with Kurama, I'm a little confused with the explanation he gave about his actions...was it that he thought he was but when he saw Kurama and Yusuke he realized he wasn't? (i just reread the section) And I've written it before, and I'll write it again. I love the way you write Yusuke's point of view! Although I'm not as fond of uke-Yusuke, I think you write Yusuke best no matter the fic. And I'm not just saying that, you really do. (I forgot to mention it in my last review, but I saw the cosplay picture on your site; you and your sister look amazing!! Normally I think cosplay always ends up looking too fake, but you and your sister did really well! T_T since BAAF was cancelled there aren't any conventions near me, so I hope you had fun! You guys really did a good job, it stinks you didn't get anything for it!)
Requiem of Silence 2005-06-21 ch 7,	abuseI can say you accomplished all your goals quite well! Although, #1 seemed a tad bit jerky yo me. Maybe it's the abruptness of the end of their ''feud''. (I don't know, I saw it as a feud. XD) Still, well done! A little short, but at the very least you updated. It's nice to know you're a regular with your fics and we don't have to wait months (or in some cases, years) for a chapter.
alex 2005-06-21 ch 1, anon.	abuseim sad that u ended it but its yur choice. i disagree what u said i thought it was a good story. keep writing kur/yus fics, u have talent in those types of stories.
THELLY 2005-06-20 ch 2, anon.	abuseSUPER SMASH BROS IS AWESOME. I LIKE THIS FIC. hEY, DO YOU THINK MARTH IS HOT. I DO. I ROCK AT THAT GAME.
THELLY 2005-06-20 ch 1, anon.	abuseAND LIKE STRAWBERRY LICORICE THIS IS AWESOME AS WELL. I LOVE ALL OF YOUR STORIES. PLEASE WRITE MORE YUSUKEXKURAMA FAN-FICS. THERE AREN'T ENOUGH OF THEM- THELLY
meikouhaikitsune 2005-06-20 ch 7,	abuseBo your story rocks and you go and discontinue it meanie i wanna find out what happens
Nyte Kit 2005-06-18 ch 7,	abusewell, glad you updated. this was a very welcomed chapter. they seem to actually be getting somewhere now. maybe they'll find their way home soon. & i have a question about your author note #1: so you were trying not to make this a lovey-dovey Yus/Kura fic? is that what you were saying? update soon!
alex 2005-06-17 ch 1, anon.	abusethat was a good but sad chapter. poor kurama... i hope yusuke is in love him. they seem right together as a couple.(i don't object to other couples like hiei and kurama, i just prefer yus/kur fics.)in ur writing u seem to know the characters feelings and personality. PLEASE UPDATE SOON! Today was the last day of school for me and im goin to be stuck at home bein bored all summer. The computer is one of my only retreats!!
Chrysler 2005-06-03 ch 6,	abuseaw, poor 'kura AND hiei, that was so sad. THis is getting really good though, please update soon, great plot/ story. Its just motivated me to write something, whether it sucks or not i need to break this stupid writers block. I'll have u on my aler and fave story list so i'll be acknowledged of ur update

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