Rather silly story. Skiped big chunks of this story. Nothing really happened. No action, either. Hope the next one is more interesting.

Reason for dissatisfaction? I supoess I didn't buy the love story- and it WAS rather mushy- in the extreme.

Have you ever gone into a story looking for one thing but finding something better instead? That's what happened here. I was interested in a Chibi-usa/Hotaru pairing but as soon as I caught a glimpse of Palla-Palla... I just couldn't let the story go. It turned out wonderful and I'm very glad I read it.

this story was sappy! LOL, but cute with another life lesson in there. and love the point about maintaining a friendship I've been telling people for years, you have to work at a friendship just like a boyfriend or girlfriend or ANY relationship that you want to last.

good job

Palla-Palla is so cute!

*hugs her impulsively*

That is a great story! You should definately write more about the Asteroid Senshi!

More Ceres, Juno, Pallas, and Vesta fics!

This story was so touching! (blows nose) I'm crying... You are so talented. I could kind of guess what would happen, yet I still got all emotional. Thank God in heaven that you aren't the evil type to just let Gallan- who I imagine to look like Tooya in Ceres- die for Cere-Cere. Poor Ailwoode... and poor Gallan... I've never been this attatched to an OC before. I'm sad that this is over. Bye

i'm sorry i review so much but i'm just here to let you know you have the best neo-moon saga on this whole freking site!please write more soon i beg you i'll be reading all your other fics as you write more stories. I can't get enough of your writing! until next time:) !

I forget if I reviewed before or not, but this story was excellent. Thank you so much for it.

Oh, so sweet! I thought Ailwood was such a creep, but he went and did that! I loved this!

I really loved this story, it was compelling and I had to keep reading it until the very end. I kinda half-expected Ailwoode to sacrifice his life so that they could still be together, but I was still holding my breath when she was sitting by the tree pining for him. Anyways, I'll be sure to read more of your work... _

oh my gosh! I seriously thought that Gallan died by the way Ceres acted but then when Ailwoode was metioned I breathed out a sigh of relief and happiness. I was also happy about Ailwoode's change of behavior. It's kinda funny to imagine Vesta in a frilly ice-skating out fit. And Pallas "smacking" Ceres was, quite frankly, cute. Keep it up, Bill!

thats the end of your story im gonna cry you got the only good story ive seen with rini in it so far *starts crying and runs off* oh well great story i hope you'll write another one

dont make gallen die and ceres live because if you do that the scouts will be facing the same problem as ch 9 except ceres will be alive ang gallen will be dead then she ll die then he ll die than she ll die then...it will REPEAT(heh-hem) sorry about that, love your story please update more soon!

If only all the lovers of the world were so dedicated. And if only I could find my Gallan. Wonderful work!

I've been keeping up with this story since the beginning but my comp wouldn't let me review till now so YAY! I so close to tears when Gallan approached Ceres and was begging her to get up. Thanks for kicking Ailwoode's butt, I was wanting somebody to do that! But please don't let Gallan die and Ceres live. Anyways, keep up the fabulous work. Blessed by Three, Blessed be.

I love it. Update soon.