uh... explain please...

who is it?

confusing but still very good and imaginative

ooh... mysterious. I think (or hope) that it's Misty.

Wonderful images! Obviously, it could be either couple. And I would enjoy it either way, because I like both couples. ^_^ Yes, you should make a sequel.

All right, I'm thinking it's Jessie... but then again, sometimes it sounds like Misty... but the guy sounds like Ash, not James, and... Okay, I'm confused. ^_^; ; Anyway, nice story! I'm going to have to say that I'd ADORE a sequal, just because I *have* to know who the story was about! ^_^

ooooooo ahs and misty ash and misty please! i wouldnt mind if it was JAJ but ash and misty are the best!!!^_^

I loved this! Um...well Ash always wears a black shirt - so Ash & Misty? But I don't mind JAJR either. It's good to see more older authors writing Pokemon stories ^_^

Ooh misterious strangers in the night!!! Actually it doesn't matter whether it's Jessie/James or Ash/Misty!!! I love both of those types of romances!!! Keep goin'!!! This looks really cool so far!!! g2gn!!! Bye Bye Bye Buh Byes!!! ^_^ :)

ASH AND MISTY!!!!!!!!!!!! Its a pool is has to be *sniff* But JAJR is fine by me ^_^

She already knows what I think of it, but just for the record: definately Jessie!

Yeah, I know, bit strange to review your own stories... BUT, this is NOT a review. This is merely a way to correct my disclaimer. When I say, "...none of this is mine..." I mean none of Pokémon. I DID write the story!
Just to clear things up.
Love,
Mistaria