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trallgorda 9/27/09 . chapter 10
This is the kind of story I love-one that could have been an episode! This story is so going in my favorites!
Moon-Raver 8/10/04 . chapter 10
That whole story played out exactly like an episode would have.

It had a good plot, great intro to get the reader hooked, great body with some good action and a nice ending with the usual bit of comedy.

Great job on that fine piece of work. I thouroughly enjoyed every bit of it! Thank-you for the entertainment!
black leather 8/10/04 . chapter 10
Wow! This is a great story. I should have read it sooner :)
Moon-Raver 8/5/04 . chapter 9
This story has been one of the most... umm... drawing(?) stories I've read. I can't wait for the updates and I really want to see how it ends.

He he he... blowing up a mothership is always good fun! Well, looks like I gotta wait for that to happen though... _

Keep it up!
Sache8 8/5/04 . chapter 9
Very professional of Jack to realize his own limitations in this case.
Sache8 8/4/04 . chapter 8
Oy. Not too cheery of an ending. I'm anxious to see how they get out of this one, and also to hear Boch's story.

Why isn't Sam getting sick, I wonder?
Moon-Raver 8/2/04 . chapter 8
Hey, missed the last update so here I am!

Nice idea for the Goa'uld god and I cannot wait to see this cure because they can't die... they just can't!

Keep up the good work and I will be waiting for the next chapter!
Sache8 8/2/04 . chapter 7
Nirtii, eh? So when along the SG-1 timeline does this story take place, exactly?
everg8er23 7/30/04 . chapter 7
"Both of you will be needed." ?

What's she gonna do to poor Daniel and Jack?

Oh, this is so exciting!
Sache8 7/29/04 . chapter 6
Interesting. I must confess I didn't see the phase thing coming.

So which Goa'uld are we dealing with, and how is it he or she exists in this ... other plane?
Moon-Raver 7/28/04 . chapter 6
I'm amazed at how fast you are updating!

You right, lots of answers there... and now adding the mothership to make things interesting...

Can't wait for the next chapter!
Moon-Raver 7/27/04 . chapter 5
Jacks gonna pull through... right? RIGHT?

Something tells me our Jack isn't gonna sit by and let this sickness take over... I can so picture him stumbling around, trying to solve this problem himself.

Anyway... Keep up the good work! Im still enjoying this a lot!
Moon-Raver 7/27/04 . chapter 4
That I didn't expect... so many answers in that chapter... and yet so many new questions.

Keep it up this story is really interesting. I REALLY can't wait to find out where the Stargate went. It... just disappeared..? I still can't get over that! lol
Mariette 7/27/04 . chapter 5
Oh no! What'll they do? God damn it, you stopped . . .
Rhuarc 7/27/04 . chapter 5
Yes, now we're talking! Suddenly the 1 month timeline just isn't soon enough! Great story. I'm loving all of the suspense. Keep up the good work, I'm lookin forwards to find out how thigns turn out.
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