 Oakleaf 4/24/12 . chapter 6Wow, it's been a really long time since this was published. I really loved this story. It had enough plot to last it that long, and the action and suspense kept me always wanting to read on.
Well done on this great story. |
 iMelinda 6/21/11 . chapter 6I first discovered the Legend of Zelda when Link and Zelda showed up among the many characters in another video game I play. They're among my favorite to play as, but I didn't know much about them other than the attacks they could use. The personality the game showed was very one-sided; all I knew was that they were determined to fight against evil.
Your story opened my eyes, in a way. I suddenly had two versions of each character in my head: Link the fearless warrior, and Link the Knight of the Triforce who had thoughts and feelings and a reason for existence. Your story showed that even the best can make mistake, which definitely helped my perspective of them.
I can say without a doubt that you are a brilliant author. You crafted a dramatic plot that keeps the readers interested and has us sitting on the edge of our seats, not sure if the good guys are actually going to win. You described everything perfectly; I could see it in my mind as I read it.
All in all, very well done! |
 NCQueen 1/11/11 . chapter 6One of the best stories I have ever read on here. |
 Star Cyber 2 12/15/08 . chapter 5Very well written and a pleasure to read! |
 CrazyKidDeath 9/29/08 . chapter 6Excellent story, one of the best i've read. |
 The Sage of Cosmos 7/5/08 . chapter 3 That was a great story. Your writting style is really clean and neat, you're one of the few who did not turn their story into a dirty romance ( you go!), so keep up the good work |
 St Jon of PDX 2/4/07 . chapter 6I'm somewhat new to the Zelda fandom but I have to say that this fic was truly amazing. I have read a one-shots here and there but this was the first epic-length Zelda fic I've read and after the very first section I was inspired to go write a Zelda fic.
Thanks for that. Being inspired is a rare gift and one I really treasure.
As for specifically what I liked, I've got to say your writings greatest strength has to be the true depth of soul and nuance of character you wove into each of the players within the story as well as your excellent grasp of story development and plotting (ie: the story-long "knight's price"/"Wisdom and Courage must stand together" threads).
This is amazing-plain and simple. Good job, and thanks for posting.
Seriously-thank you. |
 Sushi Hoshi 1/21/07 . chapter 6Absolutely epic and as potent as ever. I remember when you were still posting sections of this years ago. It goes to show that time never dulls good writing. Totally awesome story. :) |
 Hidari 11/24/05 . chapter 6Fantastic story! A perfect combination of action and waff. I don't know if Zelda and Link were perfectly in character or not since I haven't read enough manga to know, but I loved what I've read. You have made them come so alive in your story. Thanks for sharing! |
 Daemeon86 9/4/05 . chapter 6 Wow, I've read this puppy twice and it still astounds me how well the plot was divised. I have read many good and bad stories here and there and this baby is high on the charts. Very nice work. |
 Dragon's Hitokiri 4/22/05 . chapter 6great story i really loved it, it's very cute and i just love the ending i'll be on the look out for any others you may post |
 Sarmi 3/22/05 . chapter 6This is such a good fic! I absolutely LOVED it! I really hope you write more, you've seem to have left an opening. Oh, and I loved the interaction between Link & Zelda, just perfect! |
 Aya 2/1/05 . chapter 6 I had never, ever read a fascinating fanfic as yours. Love every part of it... the ending, I love everything. Thank you for writing such a great story. |
 dress without sleeves 9/26/04 . chapter 6You...they...it...I...
Yay for you. I praise you with all that is holy. Be with me forever.
In other words...
Wow. |
 Crystal187 8/29/04 . chapter 6:o I'm utterly speechless. I can't think of any words to describe this story. Your writing is fantastic; beyond anything I could ever imagine composing. I'm jealous of your amazing talent. This is definitely up there with the best fanfiction stories I have ever had the pleasure of reading. Fabulous job! |