Oh, that was really good! I loved the way you wrote it! I'm getting more and more into Artemis Fowl fics, and I just loved it! Especially Artemis' speech. Thank you for writing!

This is so good! I love the emotions you made Artemis have! You should write a follow-up or something. I love it!

This is a great story! I don't really understand the definite answer to Holly's question, though. Btw, are you planning on adding more to this story?

WOW. This is most excellent - you caught Artemis perfectly in character. The dialogue just crackled with it. I liked the alternating POVs in this, which were very effective, and also the pacing. This was very good.

Sheesh! How did this one bypass me?

You never tell me when you post a fic-la. Tellible .

This was a pretty good fic actually . I rather liked the way you handled mesmerized!Artemis. His speech, bitterness etc was spot on. That part really shone in the whole fic (and the rest of the fic wasn't exactly boiled spam, if you know what I mean).

Very very good piece. Impressive to say the least.

All the best in the Orion Awards =)

aw... usually i dislike a/h (a/j forever and ever) but this was awesome...

I love this. It's beautiful. Added it to favorites!

Aw! That is so adorable!

Oh, that was good.

Nice fic. I dont get the end though. Care to explain?

write some more

very good story why won't you update i love it you have 16 reviews now!

very very very cool.

o i love it!!

Oo wow, I love. *looks for nitpicks* um... er...Nope, i'm drawing a total blank here...