So true. You did a nice job with keeping them IC, and I don't think it's too short, just the right size. And that was definitely one of the wittiest, funniest endings I've read so far! Well done!

I love it when an author can make such a neat little story in so few words. This was great. In character, witty, almost tipping over into sentimental but then yanked back from the edge by the fantastic ending. Nice descriptions also meant I could picture the scene really well. I'll just have to go check out your other stuff I guess!

Jen

This was a really cute story! Loved it! You should add more or write more stories about Seto and Mai. They're so cute!

Oh my, such an unexpected ending! =) I liked it! I thought it was going to be cheesy, and Seto would exclaim his love or something. But no! Haha, all turned out for the better!

I'm laughing right now! He left her his bill! oh goodness, that is so Kaiba, 'Happy Valentines Day.' What a gift! How sweet, not. lol Really enjoyed the story.

Actually, that was a sweet thing for Seto to do. He's not usually that nice to anyone. Heh-heh. ;)

This story is one of the best Seto/Mai fic.s out there!! (And Seto/Mai is my favorite YGO couple!) Kudos--MANY KUDOS--to you!!

Oh, and since this is Feb. 13th-HAPPY VALENTINE'S DAY, THIS IS GOIN' ON MY FAV.S!

Oh nice, nice! At first I was wary because it was so short, but it still held Seto's character and Mai's pretty well. The wrap-up in the last two lines was excellent.
Great job, it was hilarious.

um words fail me...
it was a good story but could have been longer and why would seto expect mai to pay? she is always broke LOL...
make a few more chapters and il read them =)

Sweet! Love the couple!

Ouch... Glad I don't like this coupling to begin with. As always, well written, and so completely in character. None of that romantic mush. Oh no. Get straight to the point--that was Seto Kaiba. Inside and out.

I should know, with the temptations I've had to do that... Gods... Some people have no idea what "I like being alone" means! I swear it.

Aww! How cute! ^_^ You should definitely consider adding more chapters!

Nice ending. It was appropriate for Kaiba - he seems the kind where his gifts are always two edged. I like it.

I think that it was great and extremily funney I do not think I have ever laughed so hard in my life!

You have no idea how much I'm shaking right now. If I laugh out loud, my dad and brothers will ask what I'm laughing about, and I really can't explain that now can I? ^_^ This was GREAT! That was the BEST most EVIL FUNNIEST ending ever! WHAT a Seto thing to do! It was HILARIOUS! I LOVED it!

Ahem. On a more serious note, you know how I love almost any and all pairing, right? Well, Seto-Mai is one of those that I just don't like. I read, like, one that was decent, but it's the one pairing I won't read (unless it's written by someone I know to be talented, ::poke::). But of course, as you should be able to tell, I LOVED this. Maybe just the fact that Seto's 'valentine' is a clever, albeit rude, sleight. ~^

Ciao!
DSF

MOG:^o^ LOL Too funny! I think it's great for a first try!