please finish this story i like it a lot i'll keep reading your storys ok

Wow!
Turn up the suspense!!
Fantastic chapter!
I wonder what those challenges are...
I bet you've got a tonne of great ideas in that wonderful mind of yours!
Keep it up!

You/Kai fic fan

LOL!!
What kind of thug worries about eyeliner?XD
Great chapter, loved it!!
Sorry it took me so long to review, I'll go read the others now!

You/Kai fic fan

please finish your story i like it a lot !

please finish this story i like it a lot!

Love it and please update

So sorry I took so long... was wrapped up in a lot of things.

GO YUGI!

*waves banners and flags.*

I loved the chapter...the intensity...so gripping...

Can't wait for the next one!

To your surprise I think you wrote a good tense situation there. yes you cut it a bit short with a small clifhanger but I will live lol. Keep writing this great story, I can't wait to see what happens next.

*whistles* Very nice. Glad you got a laptop. I look forward to more. keep writing!

*Roars loudly* DRAKE! IF I COULD, I WOULD CLAMP MY TEETH SO ** YOUR THROAT AND MAKE SURE THAT YOUR LAST BREATHES WERE BLOODY ONES! DAMN HIM, DAMN THAT MAN!

Thanks for the update, well worth the wait! I hope Yugi knows what he is doing. Drake is one sick SOB, and I would really love to just toss him to some hungry Velociraptors! I hope Kitty can hang on, and the others can think of something to turn this game in their favor and against Drake.

Keep it up!

Yay you up dated I'm happy. I really liked this chapter please up again really soon please and thank you.

OMY!

NU!

She must be all right!!

I have two theories for this but I will keep them to myself...I can only hope everything turns out okay...

Well done, me likes!!

Oh, poor Kitty. She was so close!
And Yugi's coing to the rescue, but no puzzle to help him out. 8groan* Must things go down the drain so quickly? Nice chap, there were a few typos, though. Keep writing!

Thanks for the update. Well worth the wait! ^^ That's my character alright, a big sap at heart. I just hope I go Godzilla on Drake and any other criminal's asses! I may not know how to punch effectively, but my nails and teeth can leave a painful and effective mark on an enemy.

Kitty, hang in there! You too Yami! The calvery is coming, and its not gonna stop for anything or anyone! You know, Yugi reminds me of Godzilla in a way. Like this: Unspeakable power, unstoppable fury, unbreakable wil!

Keep it up!

I love this story. Plaese up date again soon.