Very, very, very well written. I'm so happy you decided to write this companion piece. This isn't the end, right? Please don't leave it here. Update soon.

It's so nice to see a well-thought out, well written story sometimes. :) Please continue writing. I really do love this spin on Seth and Ryan's relationship; it's very interesting to read and think about.

really great sequel...i love Seth, poor guy...i hope that you are able to keep going with this story

I had to go read that one-shotter from two months ago, but this was a good sequel. You better update before late September though :P

I know I'm supposed to forgive Ryan and like him again, but I just don't. Great job though, I'm eager to see how this plays out.

I like. I hope you continue.